Lake

More to a lake than lush poetic sight, Cheerfully charming us all year around. It is - over the lost soul’s angst, deep down - Streaming soft tears through the veil of the night. Lake’s sunset glows at its own tranquil pace Beckoning artists to the willow’s shade. Hiding murky, dark secret, heavy weighed, Gravely chosen as the last resting base. Lake’s diverse disposition, taunted twist - Somber and Serene dare to interplay. Yesterday’s troubling ripples go away - Two become one in early morning mist.
March 14, 2023 Sponsor: Constance La France Contest: Lake
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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Margarita, thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge !
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 9:42 AM
- Back with a congratulations :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
March 17, 2023 at 7:48 AM
Quite lovely Margarita. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
March 16, 2023 at 9:22 AM
I enjoyed Your "Lake" write. Good luck. Have a blessed day................
Hind Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 1:41 PM
Wonderful work!
Lillico  Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Thank you!
Daniel Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 6:55 AM
Two sides to a lake, that's a unique thought, Margarita:)
Lillico  Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 7:20 AM
Thank you, JD!
Turner Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:44 AM
Very well written, Maggie. It is a shame the ripples return. Unfortunately it doesn't take much to ripple a calm lake. My favorite line,"Beckoning artists to the willow's shade" it is indeed poetic:)
Lillico  Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Got my dark side out:) Thank you.
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 8:37 AM
- Yes, it can be a lush poetic view ... beautifully written, Margarita - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Lillico  Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:53 AM
Thank you!
Chuuk Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 8:18 AM
This is outstanding, Margarita. You penned it beautifully. All the best to you :)
Lillico  Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 11:54 AM
Thank you, Fin.
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