Laid To Rest

Tears no longer come, dried ducts of wrung emotion, denied one more drop of release. ... but only to feel Feel your finite presence beside me, inhaling your sweet scent to memory. Feel your heart pulsate through the calfskin of the despair that seals me in its snare. Rhythms of a hopeless eternity of love, not destined for us. Feel my heart bleeding for one more glimpse, of the exquisite life and love in your eyes. Shuttered now from a lifetime of shared souls. The pianist plays one last song, as tears fall upon your coffin. Won't you give me a sign, to show me the way to you. I wonder what has become of me, my soul a definition of despair, my mind a metaphor for insanity, my heart silenced by the loss of your call. Above, all I see are murky skies, even the stars hide from me. I'm sure the moon shed a tear, when the sun refused to shine on me. In the hope there is no tomorrow, I lay here with your photograph on my pillow. ... but time ticks so slowly
__________________________________ A Collaboration - Silent One & Judith S. September 21, 2018
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Mcintosh Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 4:32 AM
WOW - a fave. I LOVE THIS. It's a inspiration to my soul and a touch of hope caressing my heart. A thriving heartbeat of inspiration. God bless you always!
Downing  Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:18 PM
Two of my favorite people, you have touched me deeply with this heartfelt collaboration. Truly amazing and touching! Now, when are you coming back? I’ll be great to have you back too :) xoxo
Ball Avatar
February 28, 2019 at 12:35 PM
A very poignant piece here Judith. Excellent emotion. The pic is a great touch. Nicely done. God Bless, JB
Horn Avatar
February 10, 2019 at 5:53 PM
Your poem never had broken a heart; Was always loved from the very start, Had always endured; When needed cured, And to play in life found precious part. From Bolivia, NC.
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 4:12 AM
- Dear Judith - Just a little greeting from Norway - Best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your loved ones :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentile Avatar
September 25, 2018 at 10:10 AM
A late yet very heartfelt congratulations to you both! Such a beautiful, moving piece you have crafted !!!
S     Avatar
November 18, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Mike ... thank you so much for your congrats on our collab. I'm never here much anymore so I apologize for the late comment. Hope all is well with you my friend :)
Andresen Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 12:51 AM
- A deeply touching co-write from you two - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. !!! - Sorry, I have not been on the "soup" lately - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2018 at 4:13 AM
Thank you very much :)
S     Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 2:17 PM
Anne-Lise !!! So nice of you to visit and leave your kind comments. I have not been on much at all either. Summer months become so busy. Hoping to see more of you soon. Hope all is well with you and yours. ~Judy
Nicole Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 11:21 PM
You have both written an emotional moment here, it really tugs at the heart. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
S     Avatar
September 24, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Thank you so much for your visit and kind words Brandy. ~Judy
Warrior Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 3:22 PM
Awesomeness of the highest order...Superb collab....Congrats!!! on POTD!!! My dear friends...love & light...^WW^
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:35 PM
Thank you THANK YOU WW!!! So nice to see your comment here. I owe this one all to my dearest friend S.O. :) Best, ~Judy
Ajmal Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Ahh, I was wondering that where did I read that poem, and now I remember that I read it on Silent's one page and completely forgot that it was a collaboration, you two have certainly create a masterpiece, no matter how many times you read it, it it still really effective and every word has the power to touch your soul, these are the type of poems which makes you believe that pen is mightier than sword, anyways many congratulations on your poem being chosen as POTD, it is indeed a beauty
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Dear Faraz ... I honestly love your comments. I've read them on many other pieces. You offer a raw and honest interpretation that always feel as if you truly understand the emotion in the poem. Thank you !!! Best .... ~Judy
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 1:44 PM
Oh Judith and Silent, your poignant poem touched me to the depth of my soul and brought tears to my eyes. You have captured the grief of loss so beautifully in this magnificent poem. Congratulations on having it honored as POTD! It is so deserving of the honor. I am putting this poem into my Faves! xxoo
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:31 PM
Dear Connie. It is so nice to see your comment here. Thank you ... thank you dear lady for your heaftfelt words <3 ~Judy
Mcconnell Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 1:20 PM
A powerful penned piece Judith, full of passion, honesty and imagery. Congrats on being POTD, deserved fully! Have a great day, Gordon
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:30 PM
Thank you, kind sir, for your sincere words. Truly an effort of collaboration and inspired by my co-writer. Best. ~Judy
Wanter Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 10:27 AM
To read it is to relive grief experienced. Tremendous writing. Congratulations!
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:28 PM
Awwwhhh Sunlite ... I'm so sorry if you have experienced this loss and sadness. Thanks so much for your sincere words! ~Judy
Riabi Dziri Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! A work of art that touches the depths of the heart. A well earned recognition. Best regards. Be blessed always.
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:27 PM
Dear Besma ... thank you for your heartfelt comment and congratulations. ~Judy
Doll Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Brilliant free verse. Congratulations on your POTD, Judith and Silent One.
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you Warren. So kind of you! ~Judy
Sharp Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:42 AM
A very mournful piece, rendered with great care and thought. Well done to both of you. May you find peace to meet the sorrow.
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:26 PM
Thank you Lawrence for stopping to leave your very kind comments. So appreciated! ~ Judy
Pigeon Tart Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Seamless collaboration you two, lovely done, Congratulations on POTD xomo x2
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Thank you Maureen!! ~ Judy
May Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Congrats on POTD Judy and Silent..
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:25 PM
Thank you so much Joseph!! ~ Judy
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Back with congrats Judy, on poem of the day..a well deserved recognition for you.
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Dear Vijay ... so kind of you to come back with congrats!! THank you!!!!! ~Judy
Messina Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 6:35 AM
This is awesome. Great collaboration and a well deserved POTD. Congrats Judith & S1
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:21 PM
Thank you Charles for your kind words. ~Judy
Williams Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 5:44 AM
Wow, what a magnificent collaboration between two of the Soup's best poets. Judy and Si, I treasured all the emotion you poured into each and every line. You truly are a remarkable poetess/ wordsmith of the highest kind Judy. You and Si crafted this poem brilliantly together. Bravo, please keep writing, and congratulations on your POTD .....Maria hugs
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:20 PM
The soup's best poets ... can not include me! However, accolades go out to my co-collaborator. Truly an inspiration and well deserving of the title you bestow :) Thank you so much for your kind words and support my very dear friend Maria! ~Judy
Cunningham Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 4:06 AM
Back with congratulations to you both on POTD. Tom
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:18 PM
Thank you Tom :)
One Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 3:34 AM
Congrats on potd...You deserve it..
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:17 PM
Congrats to YOU my amazing friend and co-creator :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 9:18 PM
This is a great collab guys, very enjoyable but sad read!
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Thank you dear John Hamilton!!! So nice to see your comment. ~ Judy
Malik Avatar
September 20, 2018 at 10:14 AM
Tearful poem by two amazing poets <3
S     Avatar
September 21, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment my sweet friend <3 ~Judy
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