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Lace and Ribbon

Once tied to her golden hair now loose somewhere out there flowing freely unwinding slowly her silk sash slow dances in the wind he smiles as he recalls her kiss made of lace and ribbon March 24, 2019

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/3/2019 6:51:00 AM

Very lovely Vie. Congratulations on your fine win! : ) xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/1/2019 4:51:00 AM

- Congratulations, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Juliet Ligon

Date: 3/31/2019 10:22:00 AM

Beautiful! Congrats!

David Smith

Date: 3/30/2019 3:31:00 AM

You seem to be on roll. Long may it continue. You also seem to use just the right amount of words for each particular piece. Regards David in NZ

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/26/2019 5:06:00 AM

- So lovely and sweet, Pixie :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/24/2019 10:05:00 AM

Tenderly innocent, and so romantic!

Silent One

Date: 3/24/2019 6:29:00 AM

so romantic and lovely... great memories..

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 3/24/2019 5:19:00 AM

Very subtle, very poetic. Nice write, Pix.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/23/2019 11:55:00 PM

so sweet and lovely!!!!

Joseph May

Date: 3/23/2019 10:35:00 PM

Wonderful write PD ..best wishes