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Lace and Ribbon

Once tied to 
 her golden hair 
 now loose 
 somewhere 
 out there 

 flowing freely 
 unwinding slowly 
 her silk sash 
 slow dances 
 in the wind 

 he smiles 
 as he recalls 
 her kiss 
 made of 
 lace and ribbon

March 24, 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/3/2019 6:51:00 AM
Very lovely Vie. Congratulations on your fine win! : ) xxoo
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Date: 4/1/2019 4:51:00 AM
- Congratulations, Pixie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/31/2019 10:22:00 AM
Beautiful! Congrats!
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Date: 3/30/2019 3:31:00 AM
You seem to be on roll. Long may it continue. You also seem to use just the right amount of words for each particular piece. Regards David in NZ
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Date: 3/26/2019 5:06:00 AM
- So lovely and sweet, Pixie :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/24/2019 10:05:00 AM
Tenderly innocent, and so romantic!
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Date: 3/24/2019 6:29:00 AM
so romantic and lovely... great memories..
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Date: 3/24/2019 5:19:00 AM
Very subtle, very poetic. Nice write, Pix.
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Date: 3/23/2019 11:55:00 PM
so sweet and lovely!!!!
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Date: 3/23/2019 10:35:00 PM
Wonderful write PD ..best wishes
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