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contest Labyrinthine, Languish, Letter Words

sponsor Constance La France

The tangled intricate emotion of love washes a thin blood red line on the heart where a glow waits patiently on the winding path chosen that leads to a treasure we seek Where the sun rises in a fiery blaze like God striking a match on our horizon to light the way through the labyrinthine corridors of the heart that we find in the eyes of yesterday measuring whether tomorrow is more bountiful than the inlaid scars...from a tortured past filled with perplexing pictures of false dreams that left our hearts confused Today we'll travel through the maze of love seeking meadows saturated with purple asters and yellow buttercups where willowy wisps hang in the air on rainbow colors of silken wings as the soul listens to the sound of our pulsating heartbeat that flows through the labyrinth of day and night where kisses are yearning for ardent boundaries of binding arms that welcome an enchanted heart where lifting eyelids surrender to a vision of lovers searching a sunlit sky that invites a breathless rapture of treasure found in the twists and turns of love

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Date: 11/9/2023 8:43:00 AM
- Back with a well-deserved congratulations, Frederic :) - hugs
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Date: 11/4/2023 5:11:00 PM
I mean, this is awesome! Your mastery of poetic visuals and romantic yearnings are just outstanding, Frederic! You are a true poet..so talented (gushing)! A fave!
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Date: 11/4/2023 8:09:00 AM
- "corridors of the heart that we find in the eyes of yesterday" ... "a vision of lovers searching a sunlit sky" ... it's all about our choices "through the labyrinthine corridors of the heart" ... a wonderful poem, Frederic - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Date: 11/4/2023 6:40:00 AM
This is so beautiful and soulfully divine! I really love always how you paint imagery in such eloquence and how you deliver thoughts so poetically, especially the lines “ Where the sun rises in a fiery blaze like God striking a match on our horizon to light the way” what a soul warming way to think! So good! And i also love the ending! Every word in this is woven in such an intricate manner! That would touch the readers heart, so evocative! Loved reading this! A fave for me
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