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Labyrinth Pleiades

Labor to the center Lane weaves of verdant green Limitless twist and turns Light from shadows will spring Lost from the darken sky Led to mystery path Lead to the outer walls 4/15/2017 Poetry Contest: Pleiades L - Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/16/2017 3:46:00 AM

And to the inner walls, I suppose. Life is a maze. And amazing. Many wishes, Kai

Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 1:06:00 PM

Different and imaginative. A-maze-ing! (sorry, couldn't resist!) Congratulations Eve! :-)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/22/2017 9:47:00 PM

Good job, Eve! Congrats on your placement! Janice

Probir Gupta

Date: 4/20/2017 9:30:00 AM

Nice Pleiades L, Eve, Congratulations on your nice win ...

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/19/2017 9:39:00 PM

Eve, in such few words you took us through a labyrinth. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/18/2017 7:25:00 AM

Beautiful, Eve - congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:40:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2017 6:44:00 PM

I really like your choice of L word and how you did this one, Eve. Good luck in your placement. I am sure it will place!

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 4/16/2017 1:32:00 AM

Excellent. Lovely write and well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/15/2017 11:06:00 PM

I like this because it has depth and I guess I should say length in the spirit of the poem!!! Big Hugs!!! :)

Eve Roper
Date: 4/15/2017 11:09:00 PM

Thank you so very much hugs

Janis Thompson

Date: 4/15/2017 11:01:00 PM

This is a well formed pleiades. It should do well. GL in the contest.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/15/2017 11:10:00 PM

Thank you so much :-) I sure hope so hugs