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La Flamenca

Her dancing hips ignite me A castinet my heartbeat Her beauty stirs my hot blood She laughs at my stare

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/27/2011 1:05:00 PM

well, you should be subtle! ;) Naww sometimes a good stares the right thing! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/25/2011 3:41:00 AM

Congrats William on big win with this juicy one. Was away travelling hence delay in wishing. Luv / Best wishes Hitendra Mehta

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/24/2011 8:12:00 AM

I can hear the music with this one, and see her hot flaming red dress swishing to the beat.....hot hot !! Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/23/2011 7:51:00 AM

Congratulations William, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/22/2011 5:41:00 PM

No wonder Linda chose this number one in the contest. This is an excellent presentation.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/22/2011 2:49:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Linda, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 1:33:00 PM

AWESOME one. Congrats. LInda chose well!

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/22/2011 3:58:00 AM

Hi William - Congrats on your BIG WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

John Freeman

Date: 1/21/2011 8:26:00 PM

Congratulations, my friend on your worthy poem's honor in place. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/21/2011 7:29:00 PM

Congrats Will on your success in my Spicy contest for men only ... with this thrilling and exhilarating dodoitsu... thankxx for supporting my contest luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/31/2010 3:48:00 PM

This one defintely will be in the winners' circle..I am glad that I stopped by to read this one..Thanks for your stopping by..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2010 9:49:00 PM

AWESOME, I am glad from what I am seeing that I am not a male competing on the male side of this one. haha. Luv,Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2010 6:19:00 PM

William..,, enjoyed your poem. Stopping by to wish you lots of cheers & joy this comming new year.. May you always find new ways to share your talent and imagination with us here at the soup. Happy new year to you and your family,, God bless,.miss.p.d.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/30/2010 2:02:00 PM

Yes, it is really spicy with alluring picture of the person, William. Good luck in the contest

Liz Walsh

Date: 12/30/2010 7:18:00 AM

Good stuff! Liz

Sean Yeterian

Date: 12/30/2010 7:10:00 AM

I believe I know who you're talking about... unless of course it's your wife or girlfriend. In that case I don't know a thing. Really. Happy New Year good man. Sean