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Kuhlmann-Spring

Come Day:warmth,white,blooms: at play kuhlmann is a verse poem of two phrases interspered with three related monosyllabic stem- words(nouns,adjectives etc)with an integral title.The label and form is derived from the baroque poet Qiorinus Kuhlmann's sonnet form Love-kiss XLI

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/15/2009 6:07:00 PM

Great explanation.. visual too.. would this qualify... Come Storm: rain, hail, wind, splash down... is that proper? I am such a student... always loved school days of all kind.. thankxxx for sharing this for us to learn.. blessings... luv... Linda-Marie...

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 12/15/2009 5:13:00 PM

There's beauty and movement with just a few words and a picture jumped in the mind. Very cool and instructive. Thank you for sharing. Caroline.

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/15/2009 4:14:00 PM

Fantastic - again and as always! ~Juliane

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/15/2009 2:55:00 PM

another oustanding piece in the short form..which I love..you are so good to us..always something new to learn. BG

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 12/15/2009 12:17:00 PM

Brian~Again you shake me with delight a lesson of the fewer the words the more the meaning! Love it , Laura :)

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/15/2009 8:31:00 AM

Awesome! So few words hold so much info and descriptions! I will attempt this today! Wish me luck! Thanks for taking your precious time to read and comment on my poem, Brian. I really appreciate it, being the amateur that I am. Peace and love to you! Hope you're having a good day! Audrey

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/15/2009 8:24:00 AM

I love this simplistic form, and you have captured beauty in so few words! Will have to try this kuhlmann form of poetry...thanks for introducing it to us! ~ Carrie

L'Nass Shango

Date: 12/15/2009 7:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your sustained devotion to forms of brevity ... and your prolonged accomplishment in their numerous forms. Well done again.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2009 7:40:00 AM

Interesting info. Keep the educational pen flowing. Thanks for the comments on my work. Sara