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Komorebi

I anticipate the first rays as morning draws near.
The day approaches with an abundance of fear.
I gaze into the depth of the cold darkness of night,
Shyly waiting for the solace of days early light.
As I ponder what exists below the illuminating stars,
Soon the sun’s rays will stream through my prison bars.
Bent and refracted as they enter, invading my seclusion.
Dust filled spires of wistful mist add to my confusion.
Shafts of gaudy light split by the bars of my prison cell.
Please enter pretty sun beams to my man-made hell.
Yet another day has begun. The sun praise let it be.
Misty light laughs at me, knowing I will never be free.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Edmonds  Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 2:10 AM
Marvellous poetry SV, there’s times we all live in a man made cell, when nothing seems to be going well, Komorebi helps… Belle
Volumes Avatar
November 3, 2023 at 2:53 AM
Yes Belle with the sun's rays of a new day, a glimmer of hope can be found. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. Its appreciated. Warm regards SV
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 10:35 PM
Great verse, my friend. "man made cell"... you made me think.. We sometimes put ourselves in one not realizing we have.
Volumes Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 11:00 PM
That is so true sweet Eve, and sometimes Soup can be an escape from that reality. Poetry is a type of freedom, because we can be anything or anyone we choose to be. Thank you for your lovely comment. Cheers SV
Narain Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Wow, mice inspiration to write this beautiful poem.
Volumes Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 11:23 AM
Jay you can't possibly know how much I appreciate the time you take to read and comment on my poems. Thank you so much my friend.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Just wow. God bless you. much love and hope for the sun, and the SON, love, Gina
Volumes Avatar
November 1, 2023 at 11:21 AM
Thank you dear Gina, not a true story, just written for the contest. I appreciate your heartfelt comment. Best wishes SV
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