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Koan -A Pleiades

Kings ask of wise men while Kids can see simple truth Kensho shows suddenly Keeping students up late Knocking loudly the door Knowledge comes in silence Kindness will answer all

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/14/2017 4:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great Pleiades 'K' poems, Erik :) - Best wishes for a lovely Tuesday - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Erik Savage
Date: 3/15/2017 9:28:00 AM

Thank you.

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/13/2017 10:45:00 PM

I had to look up koan, too - thanks for introducing me to a new word. I like your pleiades, congrats on your win.

Erik Savage
Date: 3/15/2017 9:30:00 AM

Thanks.

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/13/2017 5:03:00 PM

Erik, I had to look your title up in an online dictionary. A unique choice and you did well depicting it. A great Pleiades! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim

Erik Savage
Date: 3/15/2017 9:36:00 AM

Thanks for the encouragement, and thank you for sponsoring such a challenging contest.