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Knowledge My Habibi and I Lazy Write

ERICK VERSION Well,I'll paint my face red sharpen my spear i am on the pad of war. I will put foot to work here. knowledge is my weapon. A Chinese in Hong Kong make me mad i will kick his ass. MY VERSION I'll put on my hoodie spears on my back gladiators on my feet head to the jungle. Knowledge will be my shield. This war i must win. Any soldier that stand between victory and i their ass i will kick. (Just a way for us to ease the pain of the distance and spaces between us!)

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Date: 4/20/2014 11:05:00 AM
He did fine but it pales in comparison to yours...Congrats to both...Tim
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Peninnah Nganga
Date: 4/29/2014 2:13:00 AM
Haha!Thanks Tim! xoxo!!!!
Date: 4/20/2014 9:18:00 AM
An amusing write and well done. There is poetry in everything, everyday. We just have to watch for it. Well done Erick and Penninha.
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Peninnah Nganga
Date: 4/29/2014 2:12:00 AM
Thanks Michael!!! Have a lovely day!!!
Date: 4/20/2014 6:18:00 AM
Poor wonderful man|!he has never tried poetry before!!!Haha!i would say he did good!?!?!
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