Knock Knock Knock

In my friends old farm house out of town
Messing around with a Ouija board, a frown 
A spirit claimed it was ten years old
And was killed on the property, sold
He came to say his last goodbye,
Knock was spelt on the board, a sigh
Three raps on the window pane
A hand running down my mane.

29.10.2020.
Spooky Rhyme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Cunningham Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 1:10 AM
Ive always been curious about them, but have heard they can play on your mind so steer well clear. Congrats on your win Carol and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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November 6, 2020 at 11:21 AM
- Congratulations on your top win in this spooky contest, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mitra Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:56 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise....Love and Hug:)
Buehler Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 10:52 AM
This poem is delightfully scary, Carol. Congratulations on your well deserved win. :) Evelyn
Mitra Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:55 PM
Thanks Evelyn....I'm happy that tou liked it :)
Stebbings Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 10:34 AM
Congrats on your win, Carol, with this poem. Ouija boards scare me. // Barry
Mitra Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:53 PM
Thanks Barry....Ouija boards are scary indeed.
La France Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 10:34 AM
Carol, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
Mitra Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 6:52 PM
Thanks Constance....much love :)
Canerdy Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 4:56 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Carol--great entry! Janice
Mitra Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 8:34 AM
Thanks Janice....much appreciated.
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November 5, 2020 at 4:45 PM
Congratulations Carol, a well deserved first place winner, even though the read gave me a shiver... Belle
Mitra Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:09 PM
Thanks Belle....Spooky it is.
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:40 PM
ooooh, that was good and creepy. Congrats on a well deserved win.
Mitra Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Thanks Andrea...much love.
Kitchin Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 1:29 PM
Carol, congratulations on first place winning placement with your delightfully spooky poem!
Mitra Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:08 PM
Thank you Tania....much appreciated.
Mcintosh Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 1:08 PM
Congrats on your spooky rhyme. I wouldn't want to play with this... God bless you
Mitra Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:07 PM
Thanks Regina.....much love.
Kauffman Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 12:35 PM
The hair on my arms just stood up straight up, Carol! Congratulations on your first place win!
Kauffman Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 12:08 PM
Absolutely!
Mitra Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 6:06 PM
Thanks Sam.....Aah so I have the ability to scare too :)
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