Knock Knock Knock

In my friends old farm house out of town
Messing around with a Ouija board, a frown 
A spirit claimed it was ten years old
And was killed on the property, sold
He came to say his last goodbye,
Knock was spelt on the board, a sigh
Three raps on the window pane
A hand running down my mane.

29.10.2020.
Spooky Rhyme.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 11/7/2020 1:10:00 AM
Ive always been curious about them, but have heard they can play on your mind so steer well clear. Congrats on your win Carol and enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 11/6/2020 11:21:00 AM
- Congratulations on your top win in this spooky contest, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/6/2020 6:56:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise....Love and Hug:)
Date: 11/6/2020 10:52:00 AM
This poem is delightfully scary, Carol. Congratulations on your well deserved win. :) Evelyn
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/6/2020 6:55:00 PM
Thanks Evelyn....I'm happy that tou liked it :)
Date: 11/6/2020 10:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Carol, with this poem. Ouija boards scare me. // Barry
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/6/2020 6:53:00 PM
Thanks Barry....Ouija boards are scary indeed.
Date: 11/6/2020 10:34:00 AM
Carol, congratulations on your win in Tania's 8 lines of Spooky contest, with this chilling poem_ Constance
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/6/2020 6:52:00 PM
Thanks Constance....much love :)
Date: 11/6/2020 4:56:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Carol--great entry! Janice
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/6/2020 8:34:00 AM
Thanks Janice....much appreciated.
Date: 11/5/2020 4:45:00 PM
Congratulations Carol, a well deserved first place winner, even though the read gave me a shiver... Belle
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/5/2020 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Belle....Spooky it is.
Date: 11/5/2020 3:40:00 PM
ooooh, that was good and creepy. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/5/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thanks Andrea...much love.
Date: 11/5/2020 1:29:00 PM
Carol, congratulations on first place winning placement with your delightfully spooky poem!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/5/2020 6:08:00 PM
Thank you Tania....much appreciated.
Date: 11/5/2020 1:08:00 PM
Congrats on your spooky rhyme. I wouldn't want to play with this... God bless you
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/5/2020 6:07:00 PM
Thanks Regina.....much love.
Date: 11/5/2020 12:35:00 PM
The hair on my arms just stood up straight up, Carol! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/11/2020 12:08:00 PM
Absolutely!
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Carol Mitra
Date: 11/5/2020 6:06:00 PM
Thanks Sam.....Aah so I have the ability to scare too :)
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