Knife's Edge

The first steps up the tower were easy;
blue dreams inside red and yellow gummies;
sweet blueberries and sugar to ease a pain.
Mind-painting secret murals on each rising tread
causing need to climb much higher, faster.

Yellow sunshine gleaming, tempts me
to fantastic leaps; up risers three by three
past giggling Pagliacci clowns;
who seem confused, uncertain, lonely.
Anxiously I slow, I feel I'm going down;
and yet still climbing.

Then unexpectedly, I meet Molly; 
the fearfully steep and narrow steps
become an endless whirling spiral staircase.
Laughing, spinning, dancing endlessly, 
the stairs rapidly dissolving beneath my feet.

We fall in love, Molly, me, everybody.
But far too quickly, that is not enough.

Up, up, up the black rock candy mountain;
ching-chang, toot-toot
unstoppable,
invincible;
stairs; four stories in a single bound.

"What's that?"
"Who's there?"

It's much harder now to climb;
feet stuck in decayed stairs
of Mexican mud; black tar.
Happiness is not a warm gun;
the stairway no longer leads to heaven.

Now at the top
Teetering precariously 
on knife's edge of sanity;
nowhere left to go but down.
Will I take the slow and painful route;
or will it be the fast, more easy one?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Goff Avatar
March 20, 2025 at 2:34 PM
Sweet rugged truths Terry, enjoyed!
Sankey- Lewis Avatar
July 18, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Thank you for sharing your journey into script reality of freedom and gratitude and growth.
Miller Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 3:08 AM
Thank you for passing by and reading.
Pandit Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 4:26 AM
Awesome depiction of reality--very apt for this theme you chose. Congrats on your win, Terry.
Miller Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 5:04 AM
Thank you so much.
Ibeh Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 12:22 PM
Fabulous, captivating write here, Terry:-) I really liked it. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
Miller Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 12:48 AM
Thank you so much for hosting these competitions, for the placement, and for too kind comments.
Alex Avatar
June 18, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Beautiful Writing. Congratulations!
Miller Avatar
June 19, 2021 at 12:48 AM
Thank you so much.
Hankins Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 4:51 PM
Enjoyed your poem, Terry. I think I understood the references, but not entirely sure. Good writing; very good writing!
Miller Avatar
May 25, 2021 at 12:45 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, yes, indeed there are many references in the poem.
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