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Kitty Cat, Freddie Dog and Mealy Mouse- Nursery Rhyme

Kitty Cat and Freddie Dog were on a merry jaunt They were always together, a compatible pair, jocund As they strolled along, they had found In one corner of the compound, a raised mound Curious to know what was hidden underground Freddie Dog sniffed and smelled all around He started digging by and by and had found A mouse living silent, home bound Freddie persuaded him to come out to the ground But seeing kitty cat, he was afraid to come around He thought they were planning to surround And feared, cat would jump on him like a hound To dismal thoughts, his mind was bound And in terrible agony he was drowned He knew a cat was a rat’s enemy, renowned Right at that critical moment, their master did descend To take them home, not allowing them to hang around Mealy mouse so relieved retired to his home underground Placed First April.21.2022 Nursery Rhymes . 3. Poetry Contest Sponsor- Eve Roper

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Date: 5/5/2022 12:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A cute Nursery Rhyme write with the 3 of them. Have a blessed day.......................
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:28:00 AM
Great story of three animals written beautifully. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/2/2022 6:51:00 PM
Great story, Valsa . Congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend
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Date: 4/22/2022 3:51:00 PM
and the mouse can breathe a sigh of relief. Cute one!!!
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Date: 4/21/2022 10:54:00 PM
Cute. And a great ending. My nursery rhymes ae never good. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/21/2022 7:26:00 PM
What a nice one, Valsa, great tale for children:)
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Date: 4/21/2022 6:56:00 PM
nursery rhymes are catchy and remain with us long ... and with god reason, I see U had great fun with this, shalom shalom my Sister in Jesus
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Date: 4/21/2022 2:47:00 PM
Ahhh!! An interesting story for the little ones. I am glad that the mouse came out alive even though we really don't want them around. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 4/21/2022 1:19:00 PM
Ha, ha! Love the title... I think 'Mealy Mouse' is what I ate for lunch today, by the way... It's ok. I washed it down with a bottle of Drano! :) gw
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Date: 4/21/2022 12:26:00 PM
Valsa, you've written a delightful story that is suitable for the contest subject. I'm relieved that they all made it safely.
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Date: 4/21/2022 11:35:00 AM
A wonderful poem Valsa - I'm so glad that 'Mealy mouse greatly relieved, retired to his home underground' Good luck in the contest my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 4/21/2022 11:17:00 AM
Somebody smells a rat . . .Aloha!
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Date: 4/21/2022 8:45:00 AM
An enjoyable tale Valsa, you should write a book for children. Hope your week is going well. Tom
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Date: 4/21/2022 6:41:00 AM
A cute tale, Valsa--apt for the contest theme. Glad they all made it safely.
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