Kite Flying - Test

Kiss me,  I want to lift you skirt flying
Inside my heart like the wind
To dance on clouds of joy my kite
Embracing time, to hold you in my arms and spin

Festively playing in the clouds
Long lines of passion I can feel
Yearning against my string
Intermittingly fawning as you bow
Naked to the throb of wind
Garrulous like a lover moaninng

The scintillated light.
Etched upon the sweat shining
Silver shafts of ribs
Tensed in every fibre and nerve of being
               ...
I want to press my lips 
Upon your cheeks, prettier than confetti paper
And let the golden sunlight drips
Chocolate of satisfaction on my tongue
Because I made a kite like this

Then to breathe your fragrance 
Falling free
From every jasmine of your limb
Where the lissome bamboos hold firm
The quivering of my string

And when the wind exhausted
Make you loop and dip
Before suppliant eyes
To cash that boyhood zeal again
And run until you rise

Or shortening your leash
Bring you in
To closer dazzle my eyes
And let your string between my fingers fall
A ravished and splendid bride

I want to make you feel secure again
Your flying strained against my faith
Buoyed by the comfort of my love
For you the only joy that fills my eye
In the huff and blow of time

I want to lift you like the wind
And with you all my affections fly
To shout in glee from my little hill
Below unlettered clouds in pride
My kite alone to fly.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/19/2010 1:40:00 PM
Ooouuu Lala! Now I think I get this one you are using a woman and a kite and showing how they might be analogus??? I did mine with an egg & the sun LOL Amen Ra..not as nice as yours my dear friend I wish I was your kite!(Please read mine and let me know if I did an analogy?) Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 12/12/2010 5:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/7/2010 1:18:00 PM
My sincere thanks to Thvia and all who have enjoyed this poem ... an artist has no greater glory than that his work satisfy his contemporaries. Thank you all, my friends.
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Date: 12/2/2010 8:00:00 PM
David, this is splendid. My fav of the bunch. Congats for this and a big FAV.
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Date: 12/1/2010 11:09:00 AM
magnificent word conjury as always..............congratulations and well deserved
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Date: 12/1/2010 6:58:00 AM
I knew this would be a winner, David. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:41:00 AM
for you are the only joy that fills my eye. congradulations on you win. john
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Date: 12/1/2010 5:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win David in Thvia's contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/30/2010 11:40:00 PM
David - Many Congrats for big win in contest.... Luv/Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 11/30/2010 7:46:00 PM
Congrats David on your big win in Thvia's contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot for a top notch poem and entry with luv..
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Date: 11/17/2010 3:46:00 PM
A carnival of the senses. You are so talented. A real pleasure to read your stuff, but I must work at it. Dave
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:50:00 PM
Now this is truly a clever analogy with a joyful quality as well, David. Hope you've entered it in Thvia's contest. A winner for sure! Every woman should be able to soar with affection. I used to love flying kites as a kid -- really made me feel happy. Excellent poem!! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 11/16/2010 3:25:00 PM
beautiful poem... well written!
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Date: 11/16/2010 1:40:00 PM
Wonderful and sensuous personfication of Kite you have penned so well. It is now the time in my homeland India to prepare for the kite flying. On 14th January we have greatest festival of Kite flying. David. Thanks for visiting and commenting on my poems
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Date: 11/16/2010 8:38:00 AM
David, what a unique way to use the kite. Awesome imagery as well. Thank you for your insights on my poems today.. Good to see you back at the soup as well ;-) Wilma
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Date: 11/16/2010 6:54:00 AM
Elegantly romantic in its theme David and the visuals are absolutely enthralling luv.. a great poem to begin one's day of reading on Soup.. so appreciate your splendid comments so warm and welcome and complimentary on my poetry endeavors here... hope u will participate in my current contest as well luv.. happy day to u..
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