Notes About The Poem
July.1.2025
Shaped Haiku 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor- JCB. Brul
~ Placed Second~
Placed First In Brian's Contest.

 

kite

he's flying a kite it flutters buoyant in air~ what a lively sport
() //\\ // he’s \\ /// fIy -ing \\ //// a ki - te. \\\\ // it flutters buoyant in air~ \\ vv/ what a \vv v/ lively sport \v *** ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
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Dietrich Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Back with more congrats, Valsa
Kendrick Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 4:08 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
Poet Avatar
July 24, 2025 at 2:15 AM
Outstanding shape, dear Valsa. Your imagination is just so artistically expressed. Congratulations on your trophy win.
Volumes Avatar
July 23, 2025 at 10:22 PM
Yes Yes Yes... This is really good Valsa! Artistic in every way. Well done.
Kendrick Avatar
July 18, 2025 at 12:13 PM
Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 17, 2025 at 4:58 PM
outstanding, Valsa. I don't have the patience or skill to do this type of poetry. You excel at it, and I enjoyed reading it.
Guptar Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 11:08 PM
Congratulations, Valsa, on your win in this contest with a lovely write on flying kite, with a vivid illustrative shape. Wish you a delightful day.
mysore Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 9:22 PM
Lively! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 11:18 AM
Cute one, Valsa. Big congrats
Woods Avatar
July 16, 2025 at 10:15 AM
I cannot believe the level of artistry in these! I'm so very impressed! Xo
Vaso Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 11:38 PM
Love how you did this!
DiMino Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 1:24 PM
Love it! Use to love flying kites. Their colorful tails and lengths only limited by imagination.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 3, 2025 at 8:41 AM
WOW!!! What a creative "Kite" write/shape/picture you have here. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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