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July.1.2025
Shaped Haiku 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsor- JCB. Brul
~ Placed Second~
Placed First In Brian's Contest.

 

he's flying a kite it flutters buoyant in air~ what a lively sport
() //\\ // he’s \\ /// fIy -ing \\ //// a ki - te. \\\\ // it flutters buoyant in air~ \\ vv/ what a \vv v/ lively sport \v *** ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/24/2025 3:32:00 PM
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Back with more congrats, Valsa
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/24/2025 4:08:00 AM
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Back with congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
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Sotto Poet
Date: 7/24/2025 2:15:00 AM
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Outstanding shape, dear Valsa. Your imagination is just so artistically expressed. Congratulations on your trophy win.
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 7/23/2025 10:22:00 PM
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Yes Yes Yes... This is really good Valsa! Artistic in every way. Well done.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 7/18/2025 12:13:00 PM
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Congratulations on this creative winner. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 4:58:00 PM
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outstanding, Valsa. I don't have the patience or skill to do this type of poetry. You excel at it, and I enjoyed reading it.
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 7/16/2025 11:08:00 PM
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Congratulations, Valsa, on your win in this contest with a lovely write on flying kite, with a vivid illustrative shape. Wish you a delightful day.
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thriveni c mysore
Date: 7/16/2025 9:22:00 PM
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Lively! Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/16/2025 11:18:00 AM
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Cute one, Valsa. Big congrats
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/16/2025 10:15:00 AM
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I cannot believe the level of artistry in these! I'm so very impressed! Xo
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 7/3/2025 11:38:00 PM
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Love how you did this!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 7/3/2025 1:24:00 PM
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Love it! Use to love flying kites. Their colorful tails and lengths only limited by imagination.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/3/2025 8:41:00 AM
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WOW!!! What a creative "Kite" write/shape/picture you have here. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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