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Kitchen Window Closed

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                                         Kitchen Window Closed
                                 Frozen birdbath, white 'oar's  frost
                                         Birds seek water, food






~An Haiku From Your Window~
For:Michael J. Falotico
Written By: Sara Kendrick

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Robin Davis

Date: 1/27/2014 9:15:00 PM

Sara What a creative and unique write. The poor birdies frozen out of their birdbath. They need a little heater to defrost it. LOL Nicely done Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Sickness poem

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/23/2011 5:43:00 AM

Belated congratulations on your placement Sara, in the contest "An Haiku From Your Window" sponsored by Michael J. Falotico. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 2/13/2011 2:25:00 PM

Good to see your near the top Sara! Congratulations! Agape, Moses

Carole Cookie Arnold

Date: 2/12/2011 7:26:00 AM

Impressive work Sara I can see why you won congrats Love Cookie

Elaine George

Date: 2/9/2011 4:10:00 AM

Many congrats on your BIG WIN, dear Sara. Sensational! Haiku. Lainie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 2/8/2011 8:03:00 PM

Awesome image Sara. Many congratulations for this win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/8/2011 2:50:00 PM

Hey, way to go, Sara!! A Big congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 2/8/2011 2:27:00 PM

Congrats to you Sara, your poetry is always amazing to me.. thank you for supporting my contest..love Michael

Kory Calhoun

Date: 2/8/2011 9:17:00 AM

Excellent, Sara - CONGRATULATIONS on your BIG WIN in Michael's contest. Best wishes, KC

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/8/2011 9:02:00 AM

How wonderful it is to see your poem on the winners' list, Sara. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/8/2011 8:28:00 AM

We have one outside our window also....just yesterday the water melted, and the birds are happy!! Congratulations, Sara!

Carol Fillmore

Date: 2/8/2011 7:50:00 AM

see the frozen birdbath, and the poor birds seeking food and water. Good luck in the contest! Sara, thanks for the comment on This View. The seagulls don't have such difficult time here as the harbour doesn't freeze over in winter (located at the mouth of the Bay of Fundy ...salt water) so getting food and water not a problem. Sonnets the easiest to write? I would have thought the opposite!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/8/2011 7:18:00 AM

rough hard imagery the way this winter has been congrad's on your BIG win![poor birdies!] Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/8/2011 4:35:00 AM

Congrats Sara on your wonderful win in the Haiku from your window contest with this creative write my friend.. enjoy another sweet top ten with luv... hope u are well and happy my friend..

James Tate

Date: 2/7/2011 6:34:00 PM

You make a good point here about the birds need food and drink during frigid weather. Did you mean hoar frost?

Kathy Kelley

Date: 2/7/2011 3:52:00 PM

Love it!!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 2/7/2011 2:14:00 PM

Nice pen picture from your window, Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/7/2011 12:07:00 PM

what a unique slant for michael's haiku contest, sara.. you enthrall me.. winning wishes to you! how is your spine??:) hugggs, nette

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/7/2011 10:35:00 AM

great poem here, ma, i wish you the best of luck in the contest. love,lightning ink.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/7/2011 10:28:00 AM

A wonderful description of nature seen through your window. I don't know how the birds survive the cold weather, but somehow they manage, Sara. Beautifully written entry for Michael's contest and I wish you success! Love, Carolyn