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Kissing Lips

Caught beneath the mistletoe while passing by was Debbie Jo; the brown haired beauty of my dreams and subject of my midnight schemes. She smiled at me then kissed my lips and sparks flew to my fingertips; my head felt light, my knees grew weak, the room seemed bright, I could not speak. It seemed as though all time stood still while lost in such a primal thrill; a moment of eternal bliss all caused by Debbie Jo’s hot kiss.
December 20, 2019

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Date: 6/14/2022 3:14:00 PM
Best christmas wish kiss ever and what a wonderful feeling too. Who needs a fire to stay warm when all it takes is a kiss with the one you desire. Hugs, Emilia : )
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John Gondolf
Date: 6/18/2022 5:01:00 AM
Sometimes a kiss can set your whole world on fire, all your hidden desires are set free. It’s strange because a kiss is such a simple gesture. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Emilia, I appreciate you. Hugs, John
Date: 12/29/2020 1:34:00 PM
Woo hoo! That sounds better than ice cream =]
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/29/2020 2:03:00 PM
Better than Hersey's kisses too... :)
Date: 12/26/2019 2:40:00 AM
Congratulations on your very passionate descriptive win! Hugs Eve
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/26/2019 1:28:00 PM
Thank you, Eve, I appreciate it.
Date: 12/25/2019 2:12:00 PM
Seems like we both are fueled by sparks this holiday season! Congrats to you, John, on this entertaining, winning poem. ~ Fellow Midnight Schemer
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/26/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon, I appreciate it.
Date: 12/25/2019 1:30:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, Kai :) - hugs and Marry Christmas // Anne-Lise :)
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/25/2019 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, merry Christmas to you and your family. Hugs, John
Date: 12/24/2019 6:13:00 PM
John gorgeous win congrats!;) merry Xmas my friend!;)
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2019 7:12:00 PM
Thank you, Bren. Merry Christmas. Ho ho ho.
Date: 12/24/2019 2:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement!
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thanks, Bobby, I appreciate it and thanks for hosting the contest. John
Date: 12/23/2019 12:39:00 PM
Lovely my friend. So well written, so full of wonderful sweet emotions... Ann
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/24/2019 9:04:00 AM
Thank you, Ann, I’m glad you enjoyed it. Merry Christmas to you and yours! Hugs, John
Date: 12/20/2019 12:20:00 PM
A kiss in the dark, will cause a spark. This is beautiful, romantic, festive and it holds the right amount of passion. Some naughty fun indeed. Your thoughts bring a smile my dear friend. :) Brandy
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/20/2019 12:48:00 PM
A kiss in the dark might cause a big spark but a kiss in the light can also excite and if the person is right it might last all night...!!! I'm standing under the mistletoe waiting... Merry Christmas my sweet friend. Hugs, John
Date: 12/20/2019 11:03:00 AM
sounds like sparks were not the only heat of that kiss...beautifully penned John :) hugs
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/20/2019 11:32:00 AM
Thank you, Sandy. Nothing like a good hot kiss on a cold winters night. Merry Christmas my friend. Hugs, John
Date: 12/20/2019 9:14:00 AM
Midnight schemes? , you're too much of a gentleman to say what that was John lol. Well written and Merry Christmas. Good luck. Tom
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/20/2019 10:13:00 AM
Thanks for your comments, Tom, sometimes this gentleman grows horns around midnight... Merry Christmas my friend. John
Date: 12/20/2019 7:21:00 AM
WoW! John, That my friend, was some kiss. I wish I could say the same about my first kiss. If this is for the " kissing" contest, you should well. Happy Holidays to you and your family and friends. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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John Gondolf
Date: 12/20/2019 7:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Alexis, I appreciate it. Merry Christmas my friend. Hugs, John

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