Kissing In the Garden

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces" 
                                           John Ruskin, 1853 


We strolled through the formal gardens, 
hand in hand, warm in the rare March heat, 
taking in the sights, sounds and smells:
flowing fountains full of fish, 
twisted and entwined topiary trees, 
showy flowers with such heady scents,
Grecian statues and urns.

Ignoring the crowds, I turned to you 
and kissed your smiling lips.
Our kisses growing more 
and more passionate,
I suddenly remembered we were in public.
An old woman was scowling 
as I stroked your long dark hair.
We held on to one another
and I told you I loved you. 

Alas, our love didn’t last,
but those memories are still precious.
Sometimes, I revisit the gardens in my mind
and kiss your smiling lips again.


Jack Horne, 23rd June,
written for Constance’s All The Little Pieces
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 31, 2011 at 9:42 AM
my first read Jack and needed this rare beauty to wake me up luv..so lovely and so perfect to fit this sunny beach day...it will be hard to go home when Summer ends..oh...thankxx for all your wonderful comments luv..
Ball Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 7:35 AM
Very lovely. Nice job here. One thing we must learn from this is that nothing in this life lasts. Good job my friend. God Bless, JB
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 11:06 PM
Jack, what kind of op does your wife need? yes, mine is at 11:30. If I wake up with not too much pain, I will be overjoyed. I need to get to bed so I can get up and vacuum, among other things, before leaving the house! Have a good Wednesday. luv, Andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 8:48 AM
thankxx Jack for the update on Gert.. I just read some of his poetry yesterday .. so sorry he is still agonizing with his arm..luv.. best wishes to him and many prayers too luv..
Brown Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "All The Little Pieces" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 5:18 AM
hoping u had a lovely weekend Jack and all is well with u luv.. enjoyed reading your grand words one more time ..to begin my week of poetry luv..
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:50 PM
Hey, you made a wonderful love poem here. So now get busy and do a three line senryu. That sensuous contest by Francine. You can DO it, Jack. WE need more posts up from you!!
Singh Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 2:01 PM
what a beautiful poem.... it would have been better if you had portrayed the view more.... the view of your lover... should have been extended and then it would have reached to kissing.... overall its good
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June 26, 2011 at 1:18 PM
A sensual delight, Jack. Who cares if you show affection in public? That nasty scowling woman doesn't seem to understand the spontaneity of love. I'm wishing you success in the contest as I "revisit the gardens in my mind." Would love to see you take first place, though that spot might be reserved. LOL Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:46 PM
Very passionate work..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara
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June 26, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Jack had to come back and read this one again this is such a beautiful piece and to cong you on your win. thank you for commenting on Falling Star, yes we wish on them over here also, and i have written a poem called wishing star which i will post tomorrow.which i wrote the 24th.
George   Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 12:10 AM
Simply Beautiful, Jack. Many congrats on your SENSATIONAL WIN. Lainie
Neels Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 1:34 PM
Hey there Jack, congratulations on your awesome win, I absolutely loved this walked down memory lane :) hope your weekend is a good one :) tc
Poet Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:23 AM
Lovely memories here Jack...congrats on your win.
Mannan Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 5:24 AM
Indeed a very special memory, you are lucky to have at least them Many congrats for this win Jack.
K. Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 3:39 AM
Such a bittersweet write this is, Jack :) But that sure is nice to have that wonderful memory to look back on-- :) Enjoyed reading this and congrats on your win :D
K. Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 3:44 AM
haha btw I just read the comments you left in Susan's write about your birthday, haha you are such a funny guy ;D, that made me laugh aloud! May the Fourth indeed be with you :D belated happy birthday :D!!
Onclaud Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 10:40 PM
… perky cheers for the amazing award, jack!! :) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 8:22 PM
well, at least you got third. Congratulations. You already know how I feel about this beauty!
Mehta Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 6:06 PM
My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, jack
Long Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 4:33 PM
congrats on your win with this stunning entry, cory
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June 24, 2011 at 3:47 PM
A great win for you Jack... Congrats my friend.... Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 3:19 PM
congrats Jack on another awesome win in the contest with this creative poetry so special and so emotional.. enjoy my friend..with luv..and happy weekend to u and Sue.. we are now puppy hunting..oh..
Mehta Avatar
June 24, 2011 at 10:28 AM
nice take on the theme of the contest with this romantic and passionate expressions, jack
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:28 PM
fave!
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:27 PM
I love this one, Jack. If it were my contest,I'd score it super high!!
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