Kissin' Up

Little Danny Hedgehog
Just a-walkin' in the garden
  Kissin' up to kittens
  Hmm... What the dickens

Danny says, Please pardon
That I was in your garden
  Kittens' tit for tat ~
  Get lost, you spiky rat
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 12:13 PM
"kittens - dickens" - I may have to borrow this one. I always think "kittens-mittens" and it is so overdone!
Zahid Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 5:40 AM
Haha that's cute and sweet and naughty. Well penned Gershon. Blessings
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 9:13 PM
Thanks for the visits and the encouragement, Paghunda. And keep your awesome rhymes! Happy Sunday, Gershon
Brown Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 7:26 PM
Hi! Gershon, Adorable!....Naughty! Kittens, Loved it ~ Debbie
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 9:11 PM
Thank you so much, Debbie. Kittens and Cream, Gershon
Ball Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Awwwww. I think hedgehogs are cute. I'd be tempted to grab him and save him from the kitties. Nice one Gershon. God Bless, JB
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 9:08 PM
Hedgehogs ARE cute -- when plucked. lol. ~ Hedging my bets, gw
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 12:45 PM
Hello Gershon, Yes I agree there will be kittens. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 11:03 AM
Hello Gershon, kittens with mittens if winter ;will still be warm they would cuddle together. enjoy your day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 8:50 PM
Kittens with mittens if winter; without, if still warm. Thanks, Darlene
Gentile Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 4:26 AM
This mean kitties! Happy Friday GW!!!
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Kitties from us 'Witties,' Mike. Happiness and Joy, Gershon
M  Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 2:00 AM
That is sooo cute Gershon,! Debx
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Sooo nice to hear, Deb! Thank you for all of your encouraging comments. Have a wonderful Friday! :) gw
DiMino Avatar
November 4, 2021 at 9:02 PM
Awe, those mean kittens. They will not mellow as they get older...and Danny better watch his tail. Sometimes we trespass and do not even know it. Personal space precious to all. Interesting read.
Wolf Avatar
November 5, 2021 at 4:40 AM
Glad to have provided something interesting. (Yawn... lol... It's still before dawn here in Chicago, and I've been up for over an hour. Being retired sure is exhausting. lol) Thanks, Joe, and have a spectacular Friday! :) gw
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