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Kissed By the Passing Breeze of Awakening Poetry Contest

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Felt kiss so cold wakes me from sleep Truth hides but words scratch out the scene Walk on walk back the path is blocked All love all laid upon hard floor I'd be the one to stamp on this Spiteful response to that cold kiss I doubt myself it's me that's wrong Blank mind forgive move on be strong I don't matter but if I did Then I deserve just this just this Keep pace with plan it's for the best Take heart off sleeve seal up in box One life tick list of things you want Though heart exists upon the breeze Be kissed warm lips warm heart in love Not cold blue print distant intent I trust this way is for the best Forgive the night I woke from sleep Regret how I opened my eyes Makes the night longer than the day To dream those dreams then pack away No end to night no breeze no kiss Close eyes float on in dream I see Where held in arms that love my soul Box up that dream farewell my heart Two halves of me one closed for good Stare off to space whilst wish you grant Don't hear when plead one wish I want

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Date: 7/20/2023 12:08:00 PM
Very innovative take on the theme DD as you tell the story hidden inside your soul. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings.
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Date: 7/21/2023 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Sam x
Date: 7/6/2023 10:08:00 PM
I love how you read it out, DD, beautiful poetry:)
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Date: 7/6/2023 10:40:00 PM
Thank you Jo, it was very quickly done in the car and I'm worried about actually listening to myself back... Thanks for the kind words x

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