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Kiss the Sky

Soft velvet tunes and silk delights

Neath summer moons and starlit nights

Romance perchance when daylight falls

That first sweet kiss as twilight calls

Two lovers on an endless sea

No other place they'd rather be

Enraptured now until the dawn

But still that kiss will linger on

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Robert Schatz

February 24, 2024 at 11:20 PM

a lovely, romantic poem; delightful. Congrats on POTD!

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 11:23 PM

Thank you Robert, I really appreciate your feedback.

Gershon Wolf

February 24, 2024 at 5:31 PM

Sweet write, Randy... and how 'bout that 'Jimi Hendrix touch' in the title?! Congratulations on POTD. ~ Gershon

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 5:45 PM

Thanks again Gershon, yes I long for the days of purple haze.

Hilda Greenhough

February 24, 2024 at 4:22 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem. The romantic tones were dynamic. Congratulations on POTD.

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 4:57 PM

Thank you Hilda, your comments are most appreciated. Take care.

Panagiota Romios

February 24, 2024 at 3:12 PM

Congratulations! Enjoy the honours and smile on this toucing, imageful , soulful creation! Cheers! Panagiota

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 3:38 PM

Hi Panagiota, thank you so much for you comments. I really appreciate it.

Brandy Nicole

February 24, 2024 at 2:21 PM

' on an endless sea, there's no other place i'd be. ' This is my kind of environment. Feeling the wind in my hair, while the soft glow of the moon sparkles everywhere. There's something magical about such a moment. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your words capture the bliss surrounding that first kiss. Congratulations Randy, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 3:43 PM

Well thank you Miss Brandy. I'm embarrassed to admit that I wasn't aware they had a POTD on the Soup. This has a been nice way to learn about it. I appreciate your kind words. Take care.

Bill Baker

February 24, 2024 at 12:19 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Randy. A very romantic rhyme poem. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 3:45 PM

Thanks Bill, I appreciate your feedback and support. Take care little brother.

Paula Goldsmith

February 24, 2024 at 11:20 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend with your win...................

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 3:47 PM

Hi Paula, thank you so much for your continued feedback and support. I appreciate it. Take care.

Jim Slaughter

February 24, 2024 at 10:40 AM

Truly romantic, Randy. Congrats on POTD, as well.

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 10:52 AM

Thank you Mr. Jim, I didn't know they had a POTD until today. I really should keep up on what's happening on the Soup

R J. Elless

February 24, 2024 at 9:58 AM

Randy, your poem flows, the rhymes are wonderful. And the theme, story Is Outstanding. Congratulations on Your POTD. Keep Rolling.

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 10:34 AM

Thanks RJ, I really appreciate your feedback and support.

Robert Sidwell

February 24, 2024 at 9:50 AM

Congratulations on POTD for this enchanting romantic piece!

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 10:38 AM

Thanks Robert, until today I didn't know they had a POTD. Ignorance is no excuse on my part. Thanks for your feedback and support.

I Am Anaya

February 24, 2024 at 9:48 AM

Pleasantly and subtlety effusive. Keeping the love theme afloat. Congratulations on your POTD, Mr. Freie! ~I Am Anaya

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 10:40 AM

Hi Anaya, thank you so much for your feedback and support.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

February 24, 2024 at 8:10 AM

Dear Randy, Congrats for POTD! Your words beautifully capture the essence of romance and the magic of love under the celestial canopy. Your verses evokes a sense of wonder and longing, transporting me the reader to a world of soft velvet tunes and starlit nights. The way you describe the first sweet kiss as twilight calls is simply enchanting, and it touches anyone who has experienced the bliss of love. This is a testament to the enduring power of love, how it can envelop us like an endless sea, keeping us enraptured until the dawn breaks. Your poem has touched my heart, and I’m sure it will continue to touch many others who have the pleasure of reading it. - Blessings, Daniel

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 10:41 AM

Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your feedback and support little brother.

Daisy Meadows

February 24, 2024 at 7:10 AM

A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 10:43 AM

Hello Jeanette, thank you for your continued support. I really appreciate it baby sister.

Linda Alice Fowler

February 24, 2024 at 7:03 AM

So sweet! An adorable and charming POTD. Congratulations on the honor Randy! :)

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 10:44 AM

Hi Linda, it was sweet of you to say so. Thank you for your feedback and support.

Nancy Kaufman

February 24, 2024 at 6:24 AM

Dear Randy, Congratulations on your POTD. This sweet romantic poem was a charming way for me to begin the weekend. Enjoy your honor!

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 10:46 AM

Hi Nancy, thanks for your kind comments. I really appreciate it.

Tania Kitchin

February 24, 2024 at 4:41 AM

Randy, a sweet poem, congratulations on POTD.

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 4:46 AM

Thanks Tania, I appreciate your feedback little sister.

Karen Jones

February 24, 2024 at 3:56 AM

Back to joyfully say hooray for an awesome poem of the day I already faved! Congratulations dear Randy!

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 4:08 AM

Thanks Karen, I wasn't aware they had a poem of the day till now. I really should keep up on what's happening on The Soup.

Unseeking Seeker

February 24, 2024 at 2:22 AM

Sweet romance ~ enjoyed! Congratulations on POTD, RF

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 2:48 AM

Thanks US, but I wasn't aware they had a POTD. Groovy! Your feedback is appreciated.

Beryl Edmonds

February 24, 2024 at 2:17 AM

Lovely romantic poetry Randy, congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 2:45 AM

Thanks Beryl, I didn't know about the poem of the day. They have that, huh? I appreciate the feedback.

Christuraj Alex

February 24, 2024 at 1:29 AM

A classical romance. Congratulations!

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 1:36 AM

Thank you so much for your comments. I really appreciate it my friend.

Jeanette Swan

February 23, 2024 at 3:46 AM

Beautifully written romance with the double image of the lovers and the sky's romance with the sea. J :)

Randy Freie

February 24, 2024 at 1:41 AM

Thank you Jeanette, I fell in love with the sea when I was in the Navy. There's nothing like a starlit night at sea. No artificial light to diffuse their brilliance and with the gentle rocking of the ship, it was a wonderful place to doze off and dream.