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Kiss the Sky

Soft velvet tunes and silk delights Neath summer moons and starlit nights Romance perchance when daylight falls That first sweet kiss as twilight calls Two lovers on an endless sea No other place they'd rather be Enraptured now until the dawn But still that kiss will linger on

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Robert Schatz

Date: 2/24/2024 11:20:00 PM

a lovely, romantic poem; delightful. Congrats on POTD!

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 11:23:00 PM

Thank you Robert, I really appreciate your feedback.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/24/2024 5:31:00 PM

Sweet write, Randy... and how 'bout that 'Jimi Hendrix touch' in the title?! Congratulations on POTD. ~ Gershon

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 5:45:00 PM

Thanks again Gershon, yes I long for the days of purple haze.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/24/2024 4:22:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your poem. The romantic tones were dynamic. Congratulations on POTD.

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 4:57:00 PM

Thank you Hilda, your comments are most appreciated. Take care.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/24/2024 3:12:00 PM

Congratulations! Enjoy the honours and smile on this toucing, imageful , soulful creation! Cheers! Panagiota

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 3:38:00 PM

Hi Panagiota, thank you so much for you comments. I really appreciate it.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/24/2024 2:21:00 PM

' on an endless sea, there's no other place i'd be. ' This is my kind of environment. Feeling the wind in my hair, while the soft glow of the moon sparkles everywhere. There's something magical about such a moment. This is so beautiful and romantic. Your words capture the bliss surrounding that first kiss. Congratulations Randy, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Tom Woody
Date: 2/24/2024 7:28:00 PM

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 3:43:00 PM

Well thank you Miss Brandy. I'm embarrassed to admit that I wasn't aware they had a POTD on the Soup. This has a been nice way to learn about it. I appreciate your kind words. Take care.

Bill Baker

Date: 2/24/2024 12:19:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD, Randy. A very romantic rhyme poem. Enjoy your special day of recognition! Bill

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 3:45:00 PM

Thanks Bill, I appreciate your feedback and support. Take care little brother.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/24/2024 11:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. What a lovely write. Have a wonderful/blessed weekend with your win...................

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 3:47:00 PM

Hi Paula, thank you so much for your continued feedback and support. I appreciate it. Take care.

Jim Slaughter

Date: 2/24/2024 10:40:00 AM

Truly romantic, Randy. Congrats on POTD, as well.

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:52:00 AM

Thank you Mr. Jim, I didn't know they had a POTD until today. I really should keep up on what's happening on the Soup

R J. Elless

Date: 2/24/2024 9:58:00 AM

Randy, your poem flows, the rhymes are wonderful. And the theme, story Is Outstanding. Congratulations on Your POTD. Keep Rolling.

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:34:00 AM

Thanks RJ, I really appreciate your feedback and support.

Robert Sidwell

Date: 2/24/2024 9:50:00 AM

Congratulations on POTD for this enchanting romantic piece!

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:38:00 AM

Thanks Robert, until today I didn't know they had a POTD. Ignorance is no excuse on my part. Thanks for your feedback and support.

I Am Anaya

Date: 2/24/2024 9:48:00 AM

Pleasantly and subtlety effusive. Keeping the love theme afloat. Congratulations on your POTD, Mr. Freie! ~I Am Anaya

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:40:00 AM

Hi Anaya, thank you so much for your feedback and support.

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/24/2024 8:10:00 AM

Dear Randy, Congrats for POTD! Your words beautifully capture the essence of romance and the magic of love under the celestial canopy. Your verses evokes a sense of wonder and longing, transporting me the reader to a world of soft velvet tunes and starlit nights. The way you describe the first sweet kiss as twilight calls is simply enchanting, and it touches anyone who has experienced the bliss of love. This is a testament to the enduring power of love, how it can envelop us like an endless sea, keeping us enraptured until the dawn breaks. Your poem has touched my heart, and I’m sure it will continue to touch many others who have the pleasure of reading it. - Blessings, Daniel

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:41:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, I appreciate your feedback and support little brother.

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 2/24/2024 7:10:00 AM

A lovely poem. Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:43:00 AM

Hello Jeanette, thank you for your continued support. I really appreciate it baby sister.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/24/2024 7:03:00 AM

So sweet! An adorable and charming POTD. Congratulations on the honor Randy! :)

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:44:00 AM

Hi Linda, it was sweet of you to say so. Thank you for your feedback and support.

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 2/24/2024 6:24:00 AM

Dear Randy, Congratulations on your POTD. This sweet romantic poem was a charming way for me to begin the weekend. Enjoy your honor!

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:46:00 AM

Hi Nancy, thanks for your kind comments. I really appreciate it.

Tom Woody

Date: 2/24/2024 5:44:00 AM

I don't think there's anything quite as enchanting and exciting as that first sweet kiss. The nature setting just enhances. Awesome POTD

Brandy Nicole
Date: 2/24/2024 7:46:00 PM

:) Smiling back at ya !

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 10:48:00 AM

Hi Tom, thanks again my brother from another mother.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/24/2024 4:41:00 AM

Randy, a sweet poem, congratulations on POTD.

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 4:46:00 AM

Thanks Tania, I appreciate your feedback little sister.

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/24/2024 4:28:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD designation. A lovely, sweet romance poem.

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 4:41:00 AM

Thank you Sara, until now I was unaware they had a POTD on the Soup. I do appreciate your comments baby sister.

Karen Jones

Date: 2/24/2024 3:56:00 AM

Back to joyfully say hooray for an awesome poem of the day I already faved! Congratulations dear Randy!

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 4:08:00 AM

Thanks Karen, I wasn't aware they had a poem of the day till now. I really should keep up on what's happening on The Soup.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/24/2024 2:22:00 AM

Sweet romance ~ enjoyed! Congratulations on POTD, RF

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 2:48:00 AM

Thanks US, but I wasn't aware they had a POTD. Groovy! Your feedback is appreciated.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/24/2024 2:17:00 AM

Lovely romantic poetry Randy, congratulations on receiving poem of the day… Beryl

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 2:45:00 AM

Thanks Beryl, I didn't know about the poem of the day. They have that, huh? I appreciate the feedback.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 2/24/2024 1:29:00 AM

A classical romance. Congratulations!

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 1:36:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comments. I really appreciate it my friend.

Jeanette Swan

Date: 2/23/2024 3:46:00 AM

Beautifully written romance with the double image of the lovers and the sky's romance with the sea. J :)

Randy Freie
Date: 2/24/2024 1:41:00 AM

Thank you Jeanette, I fell in love with the sea when I was in the Navy. There's nothing like a starlit night at sea. No artificial light to diffuse their brilliance and with the gentle rocking of the ship, it was a wonderful place to doze off and dream.

Karen Jones

Date: 2/22/2024 9:18:00 PM

Delightful and romantic with melodic rhymes and intoxicating imagery! Well done! A fav for me dear!

Randy Freie
Date: 2/22/2024 11:18:00 PM

Ah Miss Jones, from your lips to my ears. No sweeter sound around.