Kiss Me Forever

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How lovely and warm we feel
Beneath the wonderful lilac tree,
a spectacular single-stemmed and fragrant.
It attracts spring birds in their fine plumes. 
Listen to their euphonious songs.
Melodies creating soft musical notes.

But my mind is elsewhere in heavenly bliss. 
How much I appreciate your perfume
A Gucci perfect Dolce expensive,
Light blue Eou de Toilette Spray
Delicate and enticing, inviting all the time.

We sit close to each other, an invitation
From my love she echoes: kiss me, kiss me hard
As if this is our last time for even the thought
Makes me tremble with fear. So much fear.

So many are just one timer, and then they leave.
Let it not be the same for us, as we bond forever.
So, kiss me hard and look into my eyes.
Do you perceive the love I have for you?
So, kiss me again and again as if this will never end.
I need no further invitation.
My heart is filled with euphoric bliss.
Our kiss, so passionate, will last for ever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 6/8/2022 7:57:00 PM
a tender moment deftly executed...loved every line
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Date: 5/17/2022 4:26:00 PM
A Gucci perfect Dolce expensive...I love this! I just saw the movie. This is a beauty a fave! xxxxxx
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Date: 5/10/2022 1:29:00 PM
an engaging, romantic visage!
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Date: 5/10/2022 2:41:00 AM
Lovely, I notice the lilac trees are in bloom here now. Very nice background for a lover's kiss...Delice
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Date: 5/9/2022 6:04:00 PM
wow, very passionate and romantic one here. I really like this one, Victor.
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Date: 5/9/2022 11:49:00 AM
A lovely tree but your mind is elsewhere and very romantic! Awesome, Victor! Hugs ~ Kim
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Date: 5/9/2022 9:39:00 AM
WoW! Victor, This is such a well written, descriptive and romantic write. I enjoyed it very much. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/9/2022 9:10:00 AM
WoW Victor. This one should e a Valentine poem. Loved it. God Bless, JB
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Date: 5/9/2022 4:37:00 AM
The mountain laurel is blossoming here that is on the mountains around. I enjoyed reading your romantic work. I hope the love lasted forever. Your visit to my page was uplifting. Sara
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Date: 5/9/2022 2:36:00 AM
And hopefully will linger with you forever, Victor, the poetry so powerful, is a wonderful dedication to i'm sure the love of your life.
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Date: 5/9/2022 1:23:00 AM
How beautiful!!!! Such a beautiful romantic write... Lovely!!!
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Date: 5/8/2022 9:46:00 PM
How alive is the eternal lover in you . ... Victor. There is a heavenly feel in the love and fascination you feel for her. Lovely poem .
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Date: 5/8/2022 11:22:00 AM
Hello Victor, a very romantic poem you created. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Date: 5/8/2022 10:43:00 AM
Oh, a sign of love when a passionate kiss is laid and its lasting feeling forever. Lovely write. Blessings my friend
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Date: 5/8/2022 8:51:00 AM
Victor, your words conjure up images of a really picturesque setting. You've prepared the ideal setting, complete with lilacs in bloom and music playing in the background, for that eternal romantic kiss. Victor, you wrote her a charming letter that she'd never forget. BTW, this has the potential to be written in a very beautiful Pantoum, despite the fact that your choice of free verse is also excellent.
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Date: 5/8/2022 8:26:00 AM
I never heard, "Kiss me ... hard ..make mevyremble with fear ...". Original. Beautiful. Magical love I side marriage. One of your best, Vi Tor. A FAVE
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Date: 5/8/2022 7:17:00 AM
Now you’re in your native, romantic element!
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Date: 5/8/2022 4:38:00 AM
A perfect environment you created amid lilacs blooming and melodies flowing for a romantic kiss. A seductive write Victor--one she will never forget. Excellent as always.
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Date: 5/8/2022 2:21:00 AM
You paint a very romantic scene with your words Victor. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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