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Joseph's Pyramid Contest ~ August 18, 2025

KISS
gentle
lingering

he stirred my passion
our first romantic tryst
emotions bound forever 

"warm lips kindled my flames of fire"

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/21/2025 11:28:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your romantic "KISS" write again. I love how you say so much in a few words. I have been told less can be more. Have a blessed day with your win................

Joseph May

Date: 8/20/2025 5:03:00 PM

A passionate write Lin, Very nicely penned. Congrats on your win

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:54:00 AM

Thank you for the placement, Joseph.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 8/20/2025 10:37:00 AM

Lin, we hope it's something pleasant to remember. That is a sign of your idealism, which is a wonderful thing to have. It's great when there is a mutual benefit to both. Smiles!!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:54:00 AM

Ahhh yes, Duke. Only one if it's not mutual.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/19/2025 11:26:00 AM

So romantic, Lin - this kiss that lasts forever. Best wishes for the contest. Blessings of summer joy to you!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/21/2025 2:53:00 AM

Thank you so very much for your wishes, Sam.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/19/2025 1:24:00 AM

- Sweet romantic, kiss Lin :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2025 6:30:00 AM

Thanks so very much for your well wishes, Anne-Lise. ;-)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/18/2025 2:40:00 PM

Both your romantic "KISS" write and picture are great. You said so much in a few words. "Good Luck" Have a wonderful day writing away.........

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2025 6:30:00 AM

Thanks for enjoying my lines and picture choice, Paula.

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 8/18/2025 11:54:00 AM

Romance, it comes alive in your verse. The artwork is also beautiful.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2025 6:29:00 AM

Thank you very much for your kind words, Hilda.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/18/2025 9:50:00 AM

Very romantic Lin, you convey a lot in a few lines. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2025 6:29:00 AM

Thank you, traveler Tom!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/18/2025 8:46:00 AM

this is a little germ Lin - I am struggling to even think of a word but i think my muse is on holiday with us at the moment! Don't think 'turd' would be a good starting word but you know me and poop poetry lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/19/2025 6:29:00 AM

Enjoy your holiday and don't worry about finding a word to use. It'll come to you when you get home... or just stay on vacation! Thanks, Jan.