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Kiss

Oh that wonderful night how we danced Holding each other tightly entranced. There under the palms, we stole a kiss Seriously pledged our future bliss. I whispered softly, kiss me it's free, As the moon rose shining before me As the soft breeze wafting such fragrance Face blushing, a brilliant appearance. Our life began to change. I came home Too late. Her fine hair needed a comb. Gone were her lovely dresses. No smiles. No night kisses, her gaze lost in miles. A year passed and she filed for divorce. It came to me like an ugly force. I went home as quickly as I could. Needed a talk to be understood. I came home and saw her heart crying. It implied as if she was dying. Her old dress was ragged and threadbare, Dishevelled hair and needed repair. I ran to her. On my knees, I cried. Forgive me please, I was terrified. The next day I resigned from my post Took her to a shop, I knew her host. A change of clothes and a great hairdo, Then to a lunch to sustain her too. A job found, fixed hours with holidays Our new life was changed in pleasing ways. We went for picnics and nature walks We began to kiss, and have long talks, She kissed and said, "We'll soon have a boy." We kissed, hugged, danced elated for joy.

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Date: 8/30/2023 3:02:00 AM
The moments in ones life Victor what sometimes we deal with and in the end it comes out right like here my friend. Hope you are doing well my friend. /god bless you trying to catch up on your lovely poetry I was away for a while...
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Date: 8/22/2023 12:39:00 PM
Aw wonderful moments in this couple's life. Enjoyed.
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Date: 7/29/2023 3:47:00 AM
Good Afternoon Victor. I'm sorry for being late in seeing this most beautiful and gorgeous entry to which is poetic and filled with poetry elements. Where would we be without love. Nowhere. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Please get better soon. Please know I adore you and your work. Love Peace and Blessings to you now and always dear Victor. (smiles)
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Date: 7/20/2023 2:20:00 AM
A lovely story Victor, the message tells one to never give up on love, a lot of loving attention is all it needs, and kisses too I believe… Belle
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Date: 7/16/2023 7:58:00 PM
Glad your couple worked it out!
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Date: 7/16/2023 11:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a  story/write. Kisses/hugs/smiles are all still free. Have a good day writing away..........................
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Date: 7/16/2023 3:59:00 AM
Victor, congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- K Word with your lovely poem !
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Date: 7/15/2023 8:41:00 PM
Great love story or rather a kiss story. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/12/2023 6:13:00 PM
The journey the story took, from deep sadness to great joy, brought smiles, Victor. Blessings
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Date: 7/12/2023 8:09:00 AM
Victor, a sweet story in your poem with a great ending.
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Date: 7/11/2023 11:58:00 PM
I like the verse, "kiss me it's free", turn sad with her unhappiness. But found the right medicine took her shopping and a new do. Great ending. Friends for ever
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Date: 7/11/2023 11:38:00 PM
Great poem....! Though began on a happy note, storm clods gathered in the sky. There was a downpour. Once again as the sky turned cerulean blue, clouds drifted away from life and life went back to pure bliss. Lovely Victor. All the Best !
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Date: 7/11/2023 11:12:00 PM
Great poem with a twist, a happy one for a change, nicely done, Victor:)
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Date: 7/11/2023 5:24:00 PM
A wonderful poetic story. I'm glad you didn't give up and gave her what she needed.
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Date: 7/11/2023 5:04:00 PM
So glad you were willing to make the drastic changes necessary for your marriage to survive, then thrive. God blessed the two of you. Enjoyable story, thanks to the ending. Write On, my friend! Bill
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Date: 7/11/2023 3:43:00 PM
I got very emotionally involved throughot this story, Victor! Found myself in the lady’s place. Quite a turmoil of feelings & change. You callied it quite demonstratively along. Memorale. Hugs, sallh
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Date: 7/11/2023 2:20:00 PM
- With a kiss ... a lovely story, Victor ... and the kiss gave the fruit of life :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 7/11/2023 1:03:00 PM
well, that was sure a great turn-around for this story you wrote, Victor.
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Date: 7/11/2023 11:20:00 AM
It was a fruitful night--enjoyed your love story, Victor.
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Date: 7/11/2023 10:07:00 AM
aww what an emotional piece, so glad it had a happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx
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