Kinte

King of my thoughts with heart so kind Interesting connection over web line Neon soul glows impressing my mind That draws me close takes teal time Everything you are I hope to find.

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/12/2023 5:18:00 AM

"Neon soul glows impressing my mind", "takes teal time" Oh, I'm loving your colourful references along with that stunning opening line, instantly captivated my attention! "King of my thoughts with heart so kind" Wow.. Such a heartfelt and creative write with absolutely splendid rhymes.. Enjoyed reading this dear Karen..

Karen Jones
Date: 12/12/2023 5:22:00 AM

Thanks so much Hiya!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/11/2023 7:18:00 PM

Thanks for the education on Kinte. (Never read 'Roots,' and I don't have a TV. So, I did not recognize the name). ~ Gershon

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 11:52:00 PM

Lol. Kinte is my friend who inspired this poem. He was named for or in honor of said character. But kente is also an african cloth design. Kente cloth. I adore him. He is a fellow Sagittarius.

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 12/11/2023 4:53:00 PM

Some great friendships are made online. Well said, my friend.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 5:10:00 PM

Aw thanks Jerry!

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/11/2023 12:30:00 PM

Nicely composed Acrostic. Your imagery is so deep and so inspirational. I like it, especially King of my thought and Neon soul.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 12:45:00 PM

Sotto Poet thank you for your kind comments.

Silent One

Date: 12/11/2023 11:45:00 AM

That last find is lovely... we all need inspirational people in our lives..

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 12:10:00 PM

Agreed. Inspirational people make songs and poems easy nto write! Thanks Silent One!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/11/2023 3:22:00 AM

Ah this is so evocative and heartfelt. I absolutely love the way you’ve expressed here especially “‘ King of my thoughts with heart so kind“ what a line to start this with. “ teal time” “ Neon soul ”’so gorgeous how you’ve used colours too here. Beautiful rhymes too. Pleasure reading you after a long time. Sending you light always

Karen Jones
Date: 12/11/2023 3:26:00 AM

So kind of you to read it Ink Empress. Thanks