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Pulled on the parka, and turned my face to the cold street. Half running, half slipping, piece of toast hangin' from my mouth.. man oh man am I late... Two and half blocks south down Jerome to the station.. gotta make the Kingsbridge nine o five. Thank the lord above that train's never been on time. Watched the wheels whip up a flurry leaving the station. No longer in a hurry, stopped cold, my watch's face laughing. Mickey's long arm with those odd giant hands, pointing at the five. Saw something moving fast, outta the corner of my eye, was that dingey chrome? too bad it couldn't stop. I watched one glove fly away. The Bronx sky.., so grey, came into view of my left eye. Heard the angry Beetle's pilot ask 'Are you alright?!?' In hindsight., oh lord, never been better. Helped get me back to my feet, Mickey wasn't so lucky. That laughing mug's bezel cracked and shattered.. with one hand still pointin' at the five. She was talking fast, as the German punter hit second gear. My own voice sounded hoarse, and a little put off, when I noticed the car was heading the wrong way. 'Where are you going? I'm gonna be late to work!' 'Union is the closest Emergency room' I heard her say, ears still ringing... She tipped the rearview mirror toward my face, and her cool breath came at me in a misty sighing wave. Finally understood why my right eye vision was so blurred. 'I don't want to go to Union, just drop me at my place'. 'I'll go and wash my face., can I get a ride to Manhattan? I can cover your gas'... Wiped the mess from my injured eye, and turned to steal a glance.. Oh..my. She is beautif.., my aching head quit saying to itself. Suddenly lost the ability to speak. Still remember the look in that lovely face. Scared and a bit pensive maybe, but in the nicest possible way. 'Why were you standing in the middle of the street?' So many questions in those hazel eyes. 'I missed my train', I heard me say. Well., she got me through that morning, helped me clean my face. The day she quite literally, knocked me off my feet. I never made it to work, it was lost to a crazy time. Those first days, and oh the nights to follow, spent with the girl, that hit me with a Beetle.. and granted me a learner's permit in love. I thank the lord above that train was right on time.. and for the girl that came to my rescue, the day I missed the Kingsbridge nine o five.

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Date: 5/26/2021 8:50:00 AM
A gripping mini-page turner of a short story, written with evocative words conveying touching sentiment tinged with humour. Impressive and a joy to read! Well done, Richard.
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Date: 5/29/2021 11:16:00 AM
Geoffrey, Thank you for that comment. A time and a place coincide. Shelter and strength in numbers found 'Among the Trees'. -Richard
Date: 5/21/2021 3:52:00 PM
I see a strange question down here that you asked regarding color of your eyes? I don't know but you used grey in a line of this poem where you mentioned your view, whilst the girl had hazel. I won't see your reply to this because I forgot so many things, so let me know in a quick note under a poem of mine, what color your eyes are!
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Date: 5/23/2021 2:30:00 PM
Andrea, I'd almost forgotten that. -R
Date: 3/23/2021 4:03:00 PM
I could see this like I was watching a film. Great story telling!
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Date: 4/4/2021 4:33:00 PM
P.S., Here is your funny announcement never heard on a subway “Ladies and Gentleman: We are being held momentarily by the train’s dispatcher. The train’s dispatcher is a wicked man who gets a sick thrill from toying with your lives like a god. Please be patient.” *McSweeney's Internet Tendency
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Date: 3/23/2021 9:03:00 PM
Thank you P.S. I try to see past what lies just beyond my nose. But just sometimes. -Richard
Date: 3/21/2021 12:40:00 AM
What a romantic story! I LOVE this story. "The day she quite literally, knocked me off my feet." It is a FAVE for me, maybe THE FAVE!
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Date: 4/4/2021 4:27:00 PM
I almost forgot... your funny announcement never heard on a subway “Ladies and Gentlemen: This is an important message from the New York City Police Department. If you see a suspicious package or activity on the platform or train, keep it to yourself. This is the subway. Everything is suspicious. We have neither the time nor manpower to investigate things just because they’re suspicious.” -Richard
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Date: 3/22/2021 1:24:00 PM
Caren, Thank you, I was going for romance., and stitches. Lot of stitches. All the busses, planes, and trains missed. I wonder how many have met this way. -Richard
Date: 3/18/2021 1:32:00 PM
Hi Richard, I will go with Gershong Yiddish word...bashert. That captures it in a nutshell. Hugs~ Panagiota
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Date: 3/18/2021 7:53:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, Thank you for going with that. Gershon sure has a way with words. Hugz right back. Now for your announcement. “Ladies and gentlemen, please move all the way in to the middle of the train. This will allow more space for your fellow passengers, who will enclose you in a dense, indifferent gauntlet of humanity which, only minutes from now, you will have to literally fight your way through in order to attain your freedom.” Enjoy the moments in life, all of them so fine. -Richard
Date: 3/18/2021 12:52:00 PM
I enjoyed your reply to me below.
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Date: 3/18/2021 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, I enjoyed yours too. BTW, what color are my eyes? -Richard
Date: 3/15/2021 6:26:00 AM
This is excellent Richard. I fully enjoyed this story. Well written and meant to be :)
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Date: 3/15/2021 8:11:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Thank you, glad you liked it. Now, let's see what announcement is overdue. ~~ “This is a Queens-bound Q express train. The next and apparently last stop is: Three stations short of your intended destination. Sorry. There’s probably a bus somewhere, or…?” Wish I had a nickel for all those busses. -Richard
Date: 3/14/2021 5:01:00 PM
wow, I LOVE this, and I GOT every word!! So wonderful. loved the Micky mouse watch stuff. FAVE
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Date: 3/14/2021 8:55:00 PM
Andrea, I'm glad you liked it, and got it. I got a new watch. Now here is your funny announcement never heard on a subway ~~ “Ladies and gentlemen: If you see an elderly, pregnant, or disabled person near you, offer your seat. Then take a furtive look around you to see if anyone noticed your act of gallantry. Bask in the subtle, barely perceptible sense of appreciation emanating from your fellow passengers. You’re a damn hero is what you are. You don’t need to do anything nice for anybody else today.” Get a kick outta these. -Richard
Date: 3/14/2021 11:45:00 AM
It sounds like there was a universal plan that was much better than being at work on time,and aren’t you glad?
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Date: 3/14/2021 1:02:00 PM
Hi Caren, Thanks, I am so very glad. There is always fate to deal with. Here is your funny announcement never heard on a subway. “Ladies and Gentlemen: We are experiencing a momentary delay because of train traffic ahead of us. “Momentary” being something of a nebulous term, admittedly. Why, compared to the vast expanse of time, your entire life is a moment.” -Richard
Date: 3/14/2021 12:42:00 AM
All's well that ends well. Lovely romantic story despite the injury.
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Date: 3/14/2021 12:58:00 PM
Hello Victor, Thanks for taking this ride. Funny announcement never heard on a subway. “Stand clear of the closing doors please. Although should you desire to hold the doors open for any reason at all — maybe your friend is running to catch the train, maybe you’re just a sociopath — we are completely powerless to stop you. All we can do is make wan, half-hearted attempts to close the doors on you, over and over again, until you decide it’s time to release your train of hostages from their subterranean purgatory.” -Richard
Date: 3/13/2021 6:34:00 PM
Pretty amazing how things work out in life. This sounds totally 'bashert,' (meant to be, in Yiddish). ~ Star-crossed, gw
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Date: 3/14/2021 12:52:00 PM
Hello Gershon, Thanks for sharing bashert, I like that word. ikh trakhtn ikh vet nemen uber vayter tsayt...Do not lean over the platform edge to see if a train is coming, because trains can approach from either direction. -Richard
Date: 3/13/2021 3:36:00 PM
Awesome story Richard. You had me glued to your page. Imagery and the scenes are so well staged!
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Date: 3/14/2021 12:08:00 PM
Happy Sunday Vijay, Thanks for enjoying the ride. "Mind the gap". -Richard

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