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Kingly Demeanour

He is such a prize a purple presence When he shares his heart It is no less than amethyst art Right now he feels small Even though he is 6ft3 inches tall You see giants feel vulnerable too In our conversation he says "I want you" And my silence is a cherry clue I've moved on but that last love was true How can love be so desperately in need Winds blow throwing breezes of men Who can openly receive love with delicious green grin I wish everyone love but I can't be her For all I can only be for one So gently I tread on this pearly pink path Hoping to gain friendship from the jilted lad For there can only be one destined in my life I alone will decipher and decide. It's his kingly demeanor Makes me esteem and want to be her His queen and peace pipe Smoking me all day all night His kingly demeanor How he demands me while Begging in a sweet bass voice His kingly demeanor Fishing me from a lake of ladies I will choose chocolate kisses He chose me first To be his Mrs. Time will show how devine His kind is.

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Suzanne Delaney

Date: 12/16/2023 6:16:00 PM

Hi Karen: Young love is so full of joy. These lines are captivating and the admiration for your friend just glows from each line. I love the vibrant colors you choose, too. SuZ

Karen Jones
Date: 12/16/2023 8:57:00 PM

Hi Suzanne! So glad you liked it and love makes us young at heart even if we are not. Thanks ;0)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/16/2023 3:38:00 PM

Intriguing and mysterious dear poet, you had me in a spell from start to finish.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/16/2023 8:55:00 PM

Aw sweet of you to say. Thanks

Valsa George

Date: 12/15/2023 5:50:00 AM

Caren you are fortunate to be surrounded by lovers and one with a kingly demeanor waiting for you . I know the choice is yours and I also understand your predicament...'You can only be for one.' But try to enjoy when the sun still shines..... :) A sweet poem on love.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/15/2023 7:41:00 AM

Thank you for lending me wisdom. ;0)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/15/2023 1:05:00 AM

You're blessed to have each other, go for it Karen he sounds like the perfect Mr Right. Tom

Karen Jones
Date: 12/15/2023 4:48:00 AM

Hugs thanks Tom

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 12/14/2023 6:28:00 PM

A very beautiful poem of love. It has a happiness that everyone desires.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/14/2023 6:49:00 PM

Hugs Hilda and thanks for sharing that.

Sotto Poet

Date: 12/14/2023 4:22:00 PM

Behold, a great opus of your poetry repertory, presumably inspired by a close friend, for it flows with such perfect grace. There are captivating lines that grab the senses inside these rhymes, and the inclusion of gorgeous chocolate kisses makes it absolutely unique.

Karen Jones
Date: 12/14/2023 6:49:00 PM

Yes real people inspire me to write. Thanks for your comments they mean a lot to me.

I Am Anaya

Date: 12/14/2023 1:39:00 PM

Your choice is a freedom we have, I thank God every day. And who wouldn't have a swarm of chocolate kisses around such beauty as yours. Wow girly, you've got it, keep it! You have a knack for free verse, I enjoyed. Blessings to both of you

Karen Jones
Date: 12/14/2023 2:23:00 PM

Thanks I always feel as if I am stumbling as I write free verse. It means so much that YOU think I have a knack. So nice of you to say I Am Anaya!

Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 1:17:00 PM

One of your best poems... must be someone you know and thats why it poured so well.. some nice lines here and you cant beat those chocolate kisses..

Karen Jones
Date: 12/14/2023 2:21:00 PM

Wow. I am humbled by your kind words. My best poem really? I pale in comparison to much on soup but graciously I thank you Silent One.