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KIMO:: an Israeli hiku triplet  10/7/6

IN A TWINKLE on fresh earth the asphotel lily lies a bay leaf crumbles and dies we each change but in death

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Date: 1/21/2023 11:21:00 AM
A most compelling, thoughtful Kimo on the transitory nature of life. A fine read to stir thinking + reflection. Best wishes, Brian
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