Kim and Gem

We kissed each other that was a great problem We were dragonflies of Austin, Kim and Gem Cops caught us sent us to jail They did their duties without fail Poet fiends, anything wrong with our brain stem? Kim and Gem Copyright (C) Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

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Kp Nunez

Date: 12/3/2014 3:01:00 AM

Nothing wrong I assure you. Though I don't remember going to Austin, was this in college then, and you were hanging out with another Kim? lol As usual, awesomely funny limerick , funny man. Kim Patrice :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/27/2014 9:12:00 AM

witty take, rajat... this made me smile!.. huggs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 12/3/2014 5:55:00 AM

Hi nette. Love XXX rajat

Gary Bateman

Date: 11/26/2014 1:47:00 PM

Rajat, Another great one here. Enjoyed the play on words and the imagery. A "7" Sir on this fine Limerick. Best Always, Gary

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 11/27/2014 8:40:00 AM

Thanks Gary for your lovely comments. Love to you and Ingrid. God bless.---RAJAT