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Killer Combinations - Two Dodoitsu

KILLER COMBINATIONS
(two Dodoitsu)

Money isn’t everything
a vibrant smile might win her
or a very charming wit
but    poor    and    ugly?

Pork and beans – my undoing
a big plate of them for lunch
and this harmless little slip
then     she waltzed right in

Copyright © Daver Austin | Year Posted 2011

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Elaine George Date: 2/8/2011 1:46:00 AM You CRACK ME UP! Daver. I can't even write one of these. Love your style. Lainie Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/19/2011 12:27:00 PM Both are funny, Daver, but the second one had me laughing out loud. Isn't that the way it always happens -- silent but deadly. LOL Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 1/19/2011 8:22:00 AM Funny! My husband is also dealing with a sinus infection. It seems to be going around although they claim it isn't contagious. Lainie Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 1/17/2011 4:53:00 AM How harmless was the "slip" dear poet?! This is really great Sir ! Funny ! much love, james Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 1/15/2011 4:04:00 PM Good one, Daver...That might not win the girl but true love understands..Enjoyed..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 1/15/2011 2:02:00 PM Hilarious Dave! You have a great sense of humor... Hope your weekend's fun! ...Always, Annalise Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2011 1:38:00 PM oops,keep forgetting. this is a 7! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/15/2011 1:27:00 PM hahahhaa, So I inspired this witty double dodoitsu? Why thank ee. Now get busy and write some more!! (the second stanza made me think of a really funny story one of my students told us in an essay about most embarrassing moments!) Luv, Andrea Login to Reply