Kilimanjaro

KILIMANJARO

Almost lost.  Scanty  ice below equator,
Trackless wilderness of ice and fire.
Africa’s king.  I’ve climbed none  higher.
Kilimanjaro  with majestic  crater

Like the  long-gone  dodos,  -    somnolent
Before  this white man
Saw such  ground of  black  obsidian -
Kilimanjaro  -  not  extinct,   but dormant .

Gift  valley  to Kaiser  from Queen
Rift  valley - my world  is coming apart. 
Where do I go , where to start?
The Snows of Kilimanjaro are barely seen.

Hemingway knew the score
How high do we  aim?
With our  excuses   so  lame? 
And what do we settle for?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/20/2010 8:48:00 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/20/2010 8:09:00 AM
Terrific write, Sydney. Now, I may have to go out and rent the movie. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 10/20/2010 6:32:00 AM
Capturing piece on one of Africa's gems Sidney, many congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest >> James
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Date: 10/20/2010 3:30:00 AM
A beautiful entry and congratulations on your win Sidney ~ Wilma
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Date: 10/19/2010 8:04:00 PM
A unique poem about Kilimanjaro. Nicely done and nicely won. Congratulations, Sidney!
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Date: 10/19/2010 12:43:00 PM
interesting poem Sydney.congratulations!Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:48:00 AM
wonderfully done, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/19/2010 10:33:00 AM
Great poem and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2010 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations on a poem well worthy of it's place in the top ten, Sydney! Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:54:00 AM
Indeed, a thought provoking and intelligent verse, Sydney. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:12:00 AM
Super congrats, Sydney!! found this to be thought provoking as well and enjoyed your take on Kilimanjaro here--really liked the questions you posed here-- nikko :)
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Date: 10/19/2010 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Sydney
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:58:00 AM
Wow..great write. congrats on your win. BG
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Date: 10/19/2010 6:01:00 AM
Congrats Sydney on your big win in Nikko's K contest with this awesome piece.. an excellent write .. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 10/2/2010 2:29:00 PM
I enjoyed the last quatrain of this wonderful write, Hemmingway is my fav writer, Sydney
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