Kilimanjaro

KILIMANJARO

Almost lost.  Scanty  ice below equator,
Trackless wilderness of ice and fire.
Africa’s king.  I’ve climbed none  higher.
Kilimanjaro  with majestic  crater

Like the  long-gone  dodos,  -    somnolent
Before  this white man
Saw such  ground of  black  obsidian -
Kilimanjaro  -  not  extinct,   but dormant .

Gift  valley  to Kaiser  from Queen
Rift  valley - my world  is coming apart. 
Where do I go , where to start?
The Snows of Kilimanjaro are barely seen.

Hemingway knew the score
How high do we  aim?
With our  excuses   so  lame? 
And what do we settle for?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Congratulations Sydney on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:09 AM
Terrific write, Sydney. Now, I may have to go out and rent the movie. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Fraser Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 6:32 AM
Capturing piece on one of Africa's gems Sidney, many congratulations on your win in Nikko's contest >> James
Neels Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 3:30 AM
A beautiful entry and congratulations on your win Sidney ~ Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:04 PM
A unique poem about Kilimanjaro. Nicely done and nicely won. Congratulations, Sidney!
Wilson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 12:43 PM
interesting poem Sydney.congratulations!Take care~Deb
Roberts Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:48 AM
wonderfully done, congrats on your win in the contest
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Great poem and congratulations. Love, Joyce
Freeman Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations on a poem well worthy of it's place in the top ten, Sydney! Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:54 AM
Indeed, a thought provoking and intelligent verse, Sydney. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Super congrats, Sydney!! found this to be thought provoking as well and enjoyed your take on Kilimanjaro here--really liked the questions you posed here-- nikko :)
Mehta Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:10 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Sydney
Gorelick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 6:58 AM
Wow..great write. congrats on your win. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 6:01 AM
Congrats Sydney on your big win in Nikko's K contest with this awesome piece.. an excellent write .. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..
Mehta Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 2:29 PM
I enjoyed the last quatrain of this wonderful write, Hemmingway is my fav writer, Sydney
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