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Rattling and clanking Starting after the November thermostat click. I love the smell of the house When my dad would first turn on the furnace For the winter. It is a fungus-growing-on-rotting-tree smell, Something slightly burning. Soon to follow: the counters covered In Chex and pretzel sticks and mixed nuts On greasy paper towels, I love the smell of the kitchen When my mom practices grandma’s old recipes For the holidays. It is a hot-water-hitting-cocoa-mix smell, Something to come inside to from the Spearmint cold. Then: relatives visit from down the street And down in Texas, all smelling The same scents of my home And happily intruding with their cigarette-and-leather Or Coors Light-and-cologne smell in my life, Rattling and clanking.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 2/19/2015 6:52:00 PM
Evan:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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Date: 2/3/2015 4:20:00 AM
- I want to welcome you to P- Soup, Evan - The friendly words that written today can bear fruit tomorrow - Looking forward to read more poems from you in the future :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/1/2015 1:15:00 PM
Hi Evan, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/1/2015 10:29:00 AM
Evan,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) As I hope one day you will follow and give me a few poetry pointers. We're Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with your New Poet Friend! @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/31/2015 3:55:00 PM
Very nice pen Evan! Enjoyed your piece ,dear friend! A 7 from me! Have a very nice weekend. :) Love and hugs! D. ^O^"
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