Keys

by Michael j Falotico

                                                  Keys,
                                               each one
                                            touched lightly
                                              for another 
                      sound to ease and soothe the tired mind and soul..


"Music and Meditation" contest
by Dr. Ram
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 10:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Dr. Ram's contest Michael. Love, Carol
George   Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 11:58 AM
Simple and concise and beauitful, Michael. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Love, Lainie
Maverick Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 9:27 AM
enjoyed the easy portrayal in this piece Michael.
Onclaud Avatar
April 24, 2011 at 7:04 AM
wow, a special applause for this sublime piece , michael..:) huggs
Foulk Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 12:24 PM
very creative piece of fine poetry Michael.
Phookan Avatar
April 22, 2011 at 1:00 AM
Heartiest Congratulations Michael on this wonderful win.Best wishes,Gautami
Dietrich Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 11:14 PM
Michael as I said before,I love this one and a big congrats to you. SEeing yours inspired ME to do a short form in the contest as well.
Mannan Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 9:37 PM
Meditative keys , Aesome Michael. Super congrats to you for this win.
Taylor Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 5:21 PM
Congrats on your win, Mike. Excellent piece. Nice going. Happy Easter. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 5:13 PM
My White Knight has done it again..congrats Michael on your super win in Dr. Ram's contest with this energetic and electric entry luv.. enjoy another sweet victory.. with luv.. hope all is well with Roseanna's Mom..please let me know luv.. your Jersey Girl in shiver mode as it is cold ...45 today after 88 yesterday..huh??
Freeman Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 4:02 PM
Way to go Michael, Congratulations on your success in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
Haick Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 3:26 PM
Hey Michael, Congratulations on your fine 6th Place win in Dr. Ram's Contest. Happy Easter! Love, annalise
Mehta Avatar
April 21, 2011 at 2:38 PM
Congratuatons on the seventh place win in my contest, Michael
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April 17, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Just love the piano, Michael. It's so versatile...all way from soothing Beethoven to rocking Elton John. You have a very serene teractys and chose an instrument that certainly can enhance the benefits of a meditative state. Exquisite composition for Dr. Ram's contest. Sending winning wishes your way. Love, Carolyn
Poet Avatar
April 17, 2011 at 12:55 AM
This is an excellent work Michael.And wish you a very very happy birthday!-kashinath
Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 11:57 PM
I LOVE how you did yours.It inspires me to try and do this one now (If I even have time to still enter) Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Thanks for the entry, Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Completely meditative lines luv and expressed so very well Michael.. good luck in the contest.. so sorry to hear about Roseanna's Mom..hope she is not too seriously hurt and will pray for her luv... so fair lady is celebrating May 1st.. and "Sweetheart" is celebrating 5/21 what do u know... no wonder it's all good my White Knight.. luv forever and always your Jersey Girl...let me know if I can do anything for u gusy ..luv..
Neels Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 10:28 AM
I love this entry of yours Michael and I totally agree with you on your last line, good luck for Dr. Ram's contest, love Wilma
La France Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 8:01 AM
So very true, the mind is just waiting for the next key, time stands still waiting, best of luck in the contest, and thanks for your ever lovely comments on my poetry~~
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