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Key West Sunset

Celebrate the joy

You have lived another day

Spectrum in the sky

By the grace of God, go I

Join the sundown revelry



*Each day in Key West, they have a party outside to watch the sun go down.  It is 
quite a magical moment if you are able to participate and offer thanks.

For Rick's "beautiful memory" contest

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Joe Inka

February 1, 2011 at 6:43 PM

Rise on the Atlantic set on the Gulf. That was the day I was introduced to the Long Island Iced Tea, and yet I somehow still remember it vividly. Thanks for reminding me

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

September 14, 2010 at 8:36 AM

just coming back here to congratulate you Carolyn! Wonderful tanka-- and hmm I sure will let you know if I can't get rid of those hiccups-- curious as to what that fail-safe cure is ;) -- thanks-- nikko :)

Raj Nandy

September 3, 2010 at 2:20 AM

A LOVELY POEM CAROLYN ! WHERE IS KEY WEST LOCATED ? Thank you for your beautiful comments on my Inca Mail Runners ! -Raj

Brandee Augustus

September 1, 2010 at 2:09 PM

This is lovely! The description really helped to get completely drawn into the poem. Congratulations on getting a placement in the contest!

Carrie Richards

August 30, 2010 at 6:22 PM

What a lovely memory. I want to be there to see this sundown!! :) Congratulations, Carolyn! ~ love, Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

August 30, 2010 at 5:20 PM

Ciongratulations on the win in the contest, Carolyn

James Fraser

August 30, 2010 at 1:47 PM

Many congratulations Carolyn on your win in Rick's fine contest with this faith Tanka >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 30, 2010 at 4:46 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Rick Parise's contest "A Memory Of Beauty". Love, Carol

Joyce Johnson

August 29, 2010 at 8:37 PM

What a pretty tanka and waha wonderful tradition. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Andrea Dietrich

August 29, 2010 at 7:26 PM

Very nice and an intereresting thing to learn about as well. congratulation, Carolyn! LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

August 29, 2010 at 6:42 PM

Carolyn, congratulations on your win in Rick's contest.. Will send you mail on facebook in a few hours, love Wilma

James Fraser

August 25, 2010 at 12:48 PM

This must bring the community together Carolyn. I wish more people did this, it just may repair a lot of cracks in today's society. Good luck in Rick's contest >> James

Jessica Arteaga

August 11, 2010 at 1:38 PM

sounds like a fun party with such great imagery to celebrate for! lovely tanka :D

Matthew Anish

August 8, 2010 at 9:44 AM

Sounds like a beautiful scene to me! I also think you utilized the form very effectively. Yours Matthew Anish

Daver Austin

August 7, 2010 at 11:41 AM

Sundowns in Key West must be awesome. Good luch in the contest. Love, Dave

Gert W. Knop

August 7, 2010 at 6:15 AM

Amazing and well written Tanka, Carolyn! If I close my eyes I could see the sea and the sun going down!!!! And thank you for all your kind comments! Have yourself an enjoyable Sunday and best of luck for Rick's contest!....Love, Gert

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

August 7, 2010 at 5:37 AM

well that sounds like a great way to celebrate life-- sunsets truly are amazing-- wish you the best in the contest! -- nikko :)

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

August 6, 2010 at 10:23 PM

Beautiful, Carolyn! Nice expressions and imagery. Good luck in the contest and boy, would I like to see this magical moment! Thanks for sharing. Best wishes, my friend! Caroline.