Key To Finding Love

The key to finding love



Finding true love is like surfing, you must put yourself in the right place, be patient and pick the best wave.



John Derek Hamilton
July 19,2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Wigley Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 2:13 PM
A nice analogy, John. In my case, true love is like standing under a rockfall- you must put yourself in the right place, brace yourself and have what you're given :( . Regards, Viv
Hamilton Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 3:02 PM
true love? Ha ha
Neumann Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:49 AM
I am not a wave surfer and this is a great line.
Hamilton Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Kai glad you liked it!
Daniel Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 1:39 AM
This is a wonderful line, John:)
Hamilton Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Jo
Breidenthal Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Very nice one, John. Looks like you've done a number of these monokus...awesome! Makes me wanna ride a wave. Always, Laura
Hamilton Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Laura
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 2:34 PM
- A good line, wonderful thought John - // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 4:40 PM
Thanks Anne Lise
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 12:45 PM
right on the dot... great monoku, john..huggs
Hamilton Avatar
July 19, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Thanks Nette
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