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Waltz Wave
Syllable count _ 1/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/3/4/3/2/1/2/3/2/1/2/1

In a dream I'm dropping through the air tumbling and spinning completely out of control plummeting downward to the earth free falling wildly with no chute on. (Waltz Wave) 05/28/2020 Falling Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 6/5/2020 2:16:00 AM
I love this form Emile, and you make it meaningful. Congratulations on your Second Placement! What happened to your contest list of winners? I just got started on reading them and commenting and the list disappeared? Will you please put it back up if possible? Thank you Emile. xxoo
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/5/2020 8:48:00 AM
Hi Connie, thanks for you comments my friend, I don't know what list you are referring to...everything looks fine on my page, Emile.
Date: 6/1/2020 4:16:00 PM
You had me at, in a dream, my friend, The rest was a pure pleasure to read.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2020 6:25:00 PM
Thanks JC, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/1/2020 4:14:00 PM
This is brilliant Emile! Congratulations on your win :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2020 6:25:00 PM
Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/1/2020 5:46:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Congratulations on your big win. Kind wishes, Kai
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2020 8:33:00 AM
Thanks Kai, I appreciate both the placement and your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/28/2020 11:32:00 AM
OUCH! fabulous take on the theme, good luck Emile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2020 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Jan, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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