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Ker-chew

There once was a sneeze named “Ker-chew” His cousin next door was named “Flu” He found "cold" in the hallway, And threw up on the walkway, I do hope he doesn’t find you! ~written for Gwendolyn's challenge~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/2/2012 9:34:00 PM
POKEY..READING UP ON SOME OLD CONTEST* CONGRATULATIONS~ WITH YOUR AWESOME WIN! ;-)*always..pd
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Date: 1/10/2012 5:51:00 AM
Nice personification, reads well, enjoyed!
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:53:00 AM
Many thanks, Nick!
Date: 1/9/2012 10:17:00 PM
loved it loved it. A WELL deserved win. Congratulations.
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:53:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea!
Date: 1/9/2012 7:14:00 AM
Pokey congrats on your win..David
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:51:00 AM
Thank you, David! It was fun to write!
Date: 1/9/2012 6:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Sneezing Limerick" contest Pokey. Love, Carol
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, Carol!
Date: 1/9/2012 6:20:00 AM
a really cute limerick to fit the bill in this cool contest. Congratulations on a fine win here Pokey
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:50:00 AM
thank you, Robert, I had fun writing it!
Date: 1/8/2012 10:12:00 PM
Liked this Pokey. Congratulations
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Bob!
Date: 1/8/2012 7:53:00 PM
You had the cold, the flu and the ker-chew...love it !! Congrats on your win !!
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:49:00 AM
Thank you, Debra!
Date: 1/8/2012 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations Pokey on your win .Enjoyed your Limerick very much.
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:48:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 1/8/2012 6:29:00 PM
Pokey-Another new name in the winner's circle! Congrats on your winning write. Trust me, judging this was not easy. I judged the first 2 rounds and then I took the last 16 entries to the ice cream parlor to be read aloud..the other 2 poetry judges would rate them on laff-ability. The male judge loved your personification of the flu symptoms and wasn't gonna let your entry go below top 5...Thanks for making my evening so enjoyable! Gwendolen
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Pokey Lanford
Date: 1/12/2012 8:48:00 AM
Thank you very much, Gwendolen, and please forgive my slow response, as my Mother has been in the hospital. God bless you, I enjoyed writing this. Was much fun!
Date: 12/29/2011 11:31:00 PM
Pokey, this is so funny, I really like the angle you take with it, best of luck in the contest. Greg
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Date: 12/29/2011 9:51:00 PM
Pokey, this is fantastic! Very clever and cute. Best wishes in the contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 12/29/2011 8:14:00 PM
Pokey, this is really good and funny. I am reading a lot of great limericks in this contest, YIKES. mine may not hold up. I am going to work on it!! Luv, Andrea
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