Sotto Poet Poet Rubaiyat

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Keola - Rubaiyat

 Hidden quote by: Jesse Jackson


As the daze lifts, dirge ogling at blurring.
Squalls can still be stifled by soft roving.
Heaven's pinions may rattle the birdcage.
If tame grip, end up spotting candor wing. 

Conveying of the most critical stage.
Toe-to-toe quicksand slogging on the rage
We aught stark faith in our dominant muse.
Shut eyelids bury the day's grin assuage.

We, a whiff of peace, must be shining wise.
Naught deems but that you go forward to rise.
In its purest awe, love with hope bestow.
Our scheme provides a zingy gap in size.

Grin never sink out, and not backward show.
Allow it to rise, by wings swell hefts grow.
Fear and division are ousting cross-glare.
Close fetch key vibrations to the shallow.

Written: January 28, 2022

Keola Secret Poetry Contest
Sponsor: William Kekaula 

Syllables: HMS
Rhymezone

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Unseeking Seeker January 29, 2022 at 10:02 PM Superb! Good luck in the contest!

Evelyn Judy Buehler January 29, 2022 at 10:59 AM Your fantastic rubaiyat is a pleasure to read, Lasaad. I love the positive hidden message. Best of wishes for the contest, Evelyn

Bill Baker January 29, 2022 at 8:18 AM Excellent work in a difficult form, Lasaad. Words of wisdom in the embedded message. A winner in my book, but I'm not the judge. It should do well. Thanks for sharing your poetic talent with us, Lasaad, A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Tom Cunningham January 29, 2022 at 6:54 AM Well composed and very creative Lasaad, Love the embedded message. Good luck. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis January 29, 2022 at 5:54 AM Outstanding writing! Certainly deserves recognition, my friend, Lasaad. Blessings.

Vijay Pandit January 29, 2022 at 4:58 AM I like your poem Lasaad, and the message embedded within. Brilliantly executed my friend. Win BIG!

Sara Kendrick January 29, 2022 at 4:30 AM Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go for the contest. I enjoyed reading your work. These are not so easy to write but you have done a good job. Your visit to my page is always uplifting. Sara

Victor Buhagiar January 29, 2022 at 1:40 AM Brilliantly done.

Valsa George January 28, 2022 at 11:14 PM This is an amazing write ! Coming across this poetic style for the first time. .....ingeniously done, Lasaad ! Wish you all the best in the contest ! Have a happy week end !