Keepsake

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It happened in a place I’d never thought of seeing her Suddenly there she was In front of me, smiling her joy Excited, delighted My heart pounded in my chest I felt blood rush to my face And the moment was such a blessing Precious and exhilarating A combination of amazement Wonder and incredulity I thought quickly and slid my phone From my back pocket These were modern times In spite of her senior years Tears of happiness stung my eyes As I centered her face in my lens And snapped the image quickly There she was, on my phone Smiling like she’d never been gone! The moment passed and she disappeared I didn’t look for her – somehow I knew She’d gone back to heaven where she lived With God and His angels, Jesus and the Saints I picked up my phone and looked at her image Amazed that God had given me this keepsake She looked younger than I ever remembered her And I was praising God for this gift of His love When I woke up and looked at my phone Hope never far from my thoughts There in my photo album was a new image Only it was of a butterfly whispering by Instead of my lovely Grandmother’s smile K Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France September 13, 2021

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Date: 9/15/2021 11:12:00 AM
Oh Gina, your lovely poem glides on wings of joy and the miraculous! I love the miracle element! Congratulations on your win! Sending love and a hug dear friend!
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Date: 9/15/2021 7:08:00 AM
Gina, excellent and congratulations on your win in my "K" Contest with this beautiful poem, well done and I really like your image too ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/14/2021 6:37:00 PM
Wonderful narration of a beautiful incident in the form of Free Verse. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 9/14/2021 3:14:00 PM
Gina, your love for your grandmother is so evident in this delightful dream scenario you have woven into poetry. The butterfly was such a perfect ending to this tale. When I picture my grandmother's face in my mind's eye it makes me want to love God more and be the kind of generous person she was. Thank you! Many blessings ~ John
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Date: 9/13/2021 12:05:00 PM
Exquisitely composed, Gina and offers excellent lyrical wisdom and memories, best wishes for the contest.
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