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Keeping Up the Pace

Life is like a galloping horse, Flying around a track Faster and faster, he gallops Too fast to look back His need to win is crucial, He cannot afford to lose If he could communicate He would refuse One day when hurtling Around this long race track The jockey pushed him too far And cracked his whip On the horses back Faster screamed the jockey It looks like we might win, He cracked the whip again That broke the poor horse's skin The crowd were all yelling, Egging the jockey on Hoping he's a winner And they'll be rich before too long. The horse was exhausted, He had suffered enough The winning post was very near But the race had been tough The rider was feeling jubilant, He was sure he was going to win The onlookers thought so too, Cheering louder, making such a din. The horse was breathing heavily, His heart was beating fast. Sweat was pouring off him, As the other horses passed One by one, they passed him, He was no longer in the race He died peacefully later in his stable As he could no longer keep up the pace.

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Date: 6/16/2023 8:36:00 AM
Oh Shirley the ending surprised and saddened me! Wonderful poem….Debx
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Date: 6/15/2023 12:06:00 PM
Lovely piece Shirley, with nice rhyme and flow too. Also like your insightful line of thought, have a great day,Gordon
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Date: 6/15/2023 6:47:00 AM
A superb metaphoric poem, Shirley. I hear your potent message.
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Date: 6/15/2023 2:29:00 AM
How cruel to whip a racing horse. Still your poem is excellent.
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Date: 6/14/2023 9:32:00 PM
Heartfelt piece Shirley. Well written and it conveyed a message I am starting to see. We have always followed the Preakness, Belmont, and all major races. Lately many horses have been put down, Trainers have been suspended for drugging these poor animals. It seems like they are being exploited and used for monetary gain. My wife Judy was adamant about not betting or supporting these races because of the harm that was evident toward these beautiful animals. I can relate to your comment. This...
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Michael Tor
Date: 6/14/2023 9:34:00 PM
Also the Kentucky Derby...
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Michael Tor
Date: 6/14/2023 9:33:00 PM
Poem is a favorite for your support of these beautiful animals and bringing light to their plight. God bless you...
Date: 6/14/2023 6:27:00 PM
Keeping up the Clydesdales is surely a losing proposition. ~ gw
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Date: 6/14/2023 5:44:00 PM
great metaphor, i have always dream to see a horse race, thanks for the touching penning
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