Keeping Up the Pace

Life is like a galloping horse,
Flying around a track
Faster and faster, he gallops
Too fast to look back

His need to win is crucial,
He cannot afford to lose
If he could communicate
He would refuse

One day when hurtling
Around this long race track
The jockey pushed him too far
And cracked his whip
On the horses back

Faster screamed the jockey
It looks like we might win,
He cracked the whip again
That broke the poor horse's skin

The crowd were all yelling,
Egging the jockey on
Hoping he's a winner
And they'll be rich before too long.

The horse was exhausted,
He had suffered enough
The winning post was very near
But the race had been tough

The rider was feeling jubilant,
He was sure he was going to win
The onlookers thought so too,
Cheering louder, making such a din.

The horse was breathing heavily,
His heart was beating fast.
Sweat was pouring off him,
As the other horses passed

One by one, they passed him,
He was no longer in the race
He died peacefully later in his stable
As he could no longer keep up the pace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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June 16, 2023 at 8:36 AM
Oh Shirley the ending surprised and saddened me! Wonderful poem….Debx
Mcconnell Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 12:06 PM
Lovely piece Shirley, with nice rhyme and flow too. Also like your insightful line of thought, have a great day,Gordon
Pandit Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 6:47 AM
A superb metaphoric poem, Shirley. I hear your potent message.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 15, 2023 at 2:29 AM
How cruel to whip a racing horse. Still your poem is excellent.
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:32 PM
Heartfelt piece Shirley. Well written and it conveyed a message I am starting to see. We have always followed the Preakness, Belmont, and all major races. Lately many horses have been put down, Trainers have been suspended for drugging these poor animals. It seems like they are being exploited and used for monetary gain. My wife Judy was adamant about not betting or supporting these races because of the harm that was evident toward these beautiful animals. I can relate to your comment. This...
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:34 PM
Also the Kentucky Derby...
Tor Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 9:33 PM
Poem is a favorite for your support of these beautiful animals and bringing light to their plight. God bless you...
Wolf Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 6:27 PM
Keeping up the Clydesdales is surely a losing proposition. ~ gw
Rolland Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 5:44 PM
great metaphor, i have always dream to see a horse race, thanks for the touching penning
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