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Keep Holding On

An open window beckons the silence held in darkened nights with wisps she carries her tune dressed up in black attire all too soon tomorrows memories wake terrified tombed to the stake sing to me a sad song where stars all weep goodbye sing to me a sad song where my yesterday's sullenly cry last breaths await, the candle burns hot slowly the music drifts me off to sleep life lets go, her footfalls set to wander midnight grasps towards the mourning but sunset dreams keep holding on

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Date: 11/5/2017 1:08:00 PM
Everyone wants more time
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Date: 10/31/2017 8:57:00 PM
Beautifully sad and deep Tim...I can hear music for this...especially the middle verse...sings like a chorus! Have great day :)
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Date: 10/31/2017 7:14:00 PM
Has someone passed Tim? To me this poem is grieving the loss of another.
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Date: 10/30/2017 8:22:00 PM
A sad song - yes and the images are heartfelt <3 Lovely poetry Tim.
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Date: 10/30/2017 5:44:00 PM
I like , I feel each line, beautiful melancholy poetry!
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Date: 10/30/2017 11:04:00 AM
oh how melancholy is your third set. Beautifully sad.
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