Kaya

Elfin grandson, Gram's delight! In dark-eyed gaze my brown boy brings enticements to make merry. Tonight in yellow gown he spins and sings on key--twirling small canary wings.

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/27/2021 11:51:00 PM

Brilliance in a difficult invented form, Carol:) grandchildren are always a blessing:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/27/2021 1:48:00 AM

I note from comments below, you are one smart cookie, and an amazing poet.

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/27/2021 8:17:00 PM

Thank you, Harry. The admiration is mutual. I really like your poetry, too.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/23/2021 11:17:00 AM

This is so sweet Carol. Being a grandmother has been the delight of my seasoned years. Blessings xxoo

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/25/2021 7:46:00 AM

Thank you, Connie. And, you may have noticed that each of the five lines begins with letters E.I.E.I.O. It is a form I invented.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 5/23/2021 11:15:00 AM

Carol, this is delightful! Janice

Carol Louise Moon
Date: 5/25/2021 7:45:00 AM

Thank you, Janice. And, you may notice that each of 5 lines begins with E.I.E.I.O. It is a form I invented. Many poets have written this form.