Jan Allison Poet Limerick

Kay Is So Hot

Her bedding’s a damp soggy sight
Kay’s bathed in sweat night after night
She’d discovered the cause
It’s the darned menopause
Now fifty the timings just right!

 

For Kay – happy 50th! ( I have never met this lady but was asked to help write 50th birthday poems for her ... I asked her friend for some info to work on and night sweats was one of the things I was told)

 

6/30/18

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Gershon Wolf July 1, 2018 at 9:54 PM Ah, the joys of each passing decade … Hope it's O-KAY with her … :) gw

Tom Cunningham July 1, 2018 at 10:58 AM Spot on with that Jan ,getting plenty of them at the moment, keep on having to turn on the air con lol. Tom

Viv Wigley July 1, 2018 at 1:18 AM My bedding's a damp soggy sight, I found when I woke up one night, I dreamt I was weeing, then woke up and seeing, I was- well, my dream was quite right! Not as good as your Lim, though. Hope she likes it, jan. Viv x Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:59 AM ha ha ha love your reply Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner June 30, 2018 at 10:15 PM Sounds funny to me but then again I'm not a woman. lol Great limerick, Jan:) Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:59 AM LOL DT, but you guys have to live with the bad moods etc lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane June 30, 2018 at 5:52 PM She can be hot in more ways than one. Good limerick, of course, Jan. Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:58 AM definitely Lin!!!:-) hugs jAN XX

Kim Rodrigues June 30, 2018 at 4:45 PM Great! It’s rosy on the other side...lol Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:58 AM love that comment:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance June 30, 2018 at 4:14 PM oh , I'm not looking forward to that lol. good poem i hope she likes it ;) Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:58 AM I hope it makes her smile Cas, I wrote about 3 other stanzas on other subjects too but find it so hard to write about someone I don't know:-( hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty June 30, 2018 at 4:00 PM Funny like it Jan. Men are very lucky we don't have to give birth or face the menopause. Wrote 1 for you Polite young Boy Jan. Please check it out Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:57 AM Men are so lucky Chris!:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith June 30, 2018 at 3:45 PM Lol...she's hot I hear Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:49 AM she's hot, a lot lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry June 30, 2018 at 2:02 PM Lol! That ought to fit. You do these so well. :) Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:48 AM The lady who asked me to write is going to add some of my verses to her own thoughts, I find it so hard to write about someone I don't know so could only write general stanzas:-) hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin June 30, 2018 at 1:59 PM Ha ha, love your limericks! Jan Allison July 1, 2018 at 3:47 AM Thanks Tania, I love the form:-) hugs Jan xx