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Kay Is So Hot

Her bedding’s a damp soggy sight Kay’s bathed in sweat night after night She’d discovered the cause It’s the darned menopause Now fifty the timings just right! For Kay – happy 50th! ( I have never met this lady but was asked to help write 50th birthday poems for her ... I asked her friend for some info to work on and night sweats was one of the things I was told) 6/30/18

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/1/2018 9:54:00 PM

Ah, the joys of each passing decade … Hope it's O-KAY with her … :) gw

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/1/2018 10:58:00 AM

Spot on with that Jan ,getting plenty of them at the moment, keep on having to turn on the air con lol. Tom

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/1/2018 1:18:00 AM

My bedding's a damp soggy sight, I found when I woke up one night, I dreamt I was weeing, then woke up and seeing, I was- well, my dream was quite right! Not as good as your Lim, though. Hope she likes it, jan. Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:59:00 AM

ha ha ha love your reply Mr Viv:-) hugs Jan xx

Daniel Turner

Date: 6/30/2018 10:15:00 PM

Sounds funny to me but then again I'm not a woman. lol Great limerick, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:59:00 AM

LOL DT, but you guys have to live with the bad moods etc lol:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane

Date: 6/30/2018 5:52:00 PM

She can be hot in more ways than one. Good limerick, of course, Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:58:00 AM

definitely Lin!!!:-) hugs jAN XX

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/30/2018 4:45:00 PM

Great! It’s rosy on the other side...lol

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:58:00 AM

love that comment:-) hugs jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/30/2018 4:14:00 PM

oh , I'm not looking forward to that lol. good poem i hope she likes it ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:58:00 AM

I hope it makes her smile Cas, I wrote about 3 other stanzas on other subjects too but find it so hard to write about someone I don't know:-( hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 6/30/2018 4:00:00 PM

Funny like it Jan. Men are very lucky we don't have to give birth or face the menopause. Wrote 1 for you Polite young Boy Jan. Please check it out

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:57:00 AM

Men are so lucky Chris!:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 6/30/2018 3:45:00 PM

Lol...she's hot I hear

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:49:00 AM

she's hot, a lot lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/30/2018 2:02:00 PM

Lol! That ought to fit. You do these so well. :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:48:00 AM

The lady who asked me to write is going to add some of my verses to her own thoughts, I find it so hard to write about someone I don't know so could only write general stanzas:-) hugs jan xx

Tania Kitchin

Date: 6/30/2018 1:59:00 PM

Ha ha, love your limericks!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/1/2018 3:47:00 AM

Thanks Tania, I love the form:-) hugs Jan xx