Kaos

Kaos My mind it wanders I try to real it in the haze, the distance its hard to determine reality Where it begins, where it ends Amidst the noise and colors a blend of thoughts are lost I travel through the paths of consciousness only to find Kaos The struggle is real the blank stares are strong My eyes gloss over, the tears roll down inside I struggle for where I belong No beginning, no end just caught in the middle Kaos - My eternal friend

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/12/2024 6:45:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/20/2019 1:42:00 PM

Welcome to soup Lee. I do this also. "I travel through the paths of consciousness only to find Kaos"

Chris Green

Date: 8/19/2019 1:00:00 PM

Nicely expressed, you have capture the feeling of kaos well in this piece.

Lee Ann Terry
Date: 8/19/2019 1:08:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed.