Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- Kanzi -

Give me an apple
from my garden
Red and juicy
An aromatic, fresh taste
In the apple's stomach,
many small apple children
A smell of summer and sunshine

They are cheaper today,
compared with the price
on an apple in the garden of Eden
Have you thought about that, Isaac Newton ?
An apple to the day, keeps the doctor away












23.03.2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
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* Kanzi, means 'hidden treasure' in Swahili

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Leanne Lovejoy-Burton March 26, 2018 at 11:46 PM Fabulous image. Don't you bite me or I'll bite back kind of apple...lol. x Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2018 at 1:53 PM - Be careful ... sharp teeth, Leanne :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

FJ Thomas March 26, 2018 at 5:02 PM Love learning new things dear sostre! Thank you! Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2018 at 1:51 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, søster :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 26, 2018 at 6:35 AM ...an apple a day keeps the doctor away BUT if the doctor is cute...the hell with the fruit! Haha! Very well done my friend, Anne-Lise! Hugs P.S.: It will take some time before I eat another apple because of the picture! haha! FJ Thomas March 26, 2018 at 5:01 PM Lolol too funny Demetrios! Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2018 at 6:43 AM - You have to choose a "cute" apple ... and share it with your doctor :) - Many thanks my friend, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maria Williams March 26, 2018 at 4:40 AM That apple is going to give me nightmares for sure, lol, just joking. I really like your take on this Anne-Lise, indeed it is one to ponder on....Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2018 at 1:51 PM - Nice girls sweet apples, Maria :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam March 26, 2018 at 2:26 AM Excellent and thought provoking write. Although your picture is scary. hahahha. Thanks for sharing it. Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2018 at 1:49 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 25, 2018 at 5:10 PM you charm me with apples and gravity, anne... wow.. happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2018 at 1:49 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith March 25, 2018 at 10:52 AM Don't think I wanna bite out of that one. Enjoyed the write Anne-Lise, have a good Sunday... Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 1:00 PM - Charlie, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One March 25, 2018 at 10:13 AM Interesting thoughts Anne Lise... Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 1:00 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid March 25, 2018 at 7:48 AM from the picture smiling a dangerous looking apple anne lise your pen shone beautifully wishing you a blessed day pal Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:59 PM - Yes, I must confess that it looks scary ... I would never eat it, Liam :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley March 25, 2018 at 2:21 AM made me smile, Anne-Lise, a fun but thoughtful write. Viv x Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:57 PM - I love your smile, Viv ... many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Matthew Anish March 25, 2018 at 12:20 AM I try to eat an apple every day. We are safer than Adam and Eve were! Stimulating poem! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:56 PM - No punishment for eating an apple today, enjoy your apple Matthew :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sakshi Singh March 24, 2018 at 9:52 AM Hmm.. Lovely poem :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:52 PM - Sakshi, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green March 23, 2018 at 9:07 PM Definitely causes the reader to think but that image might keep me from ever eating an apple again. :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:52 PM - Eat your apple with joy and pleasure, Chris :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley March 23, 2018 at 8:30 PM Anne-Lise, an intriguing and thought provoking poem full of meaningful artistry.. Lovely! Warmest wishes. ~Susan Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:50 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison March 23, 2018 at 6:59 PM love the image and the poem is quite thought provoking Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:50 PM - Jan, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Evans March 23, 2018 at 6:33 PM Excellent poem. Thought provoking, visual and artistic. Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:49 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker March 23, 2018 at 5:54 PM nice poem interesting picture, love apples Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:49 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Frederic :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham March 23, 2018 at 5:31 PM An interesting verse Sunshine.Did Eve tempt Adam, did an apple really fall on Isaac Newton. Food for thought ,excuse the pun. Tom Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:48 PM - Yes, what is true ... what is fictional ... many questions we will never get an answer to, Tom :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arturo Michael March 23, 2018 at 5:23 PM Not the kind that falls on heads...He must have contemplated many scenarios...but for sure there's sunshine there in...All the best Anne-Lise Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2018 at 12:45 PM - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit March 23, 2018 at 3:51 PM A unique theme..among its many attributes falling apple helped discover gravity.. as you refer, Anne Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2018 at 4:08 PM - An aha moment :) - Did an apple really fall on Isaac Newton's head ? :) - He was mathematician, astronomer, theologian, author and physicist a very wise man, Vijay :) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)