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Kansas Hibiscus

She watched her move
	The potted Chinese Hibiscus inside,
	Sliding it over the not yet frozen ground,
	Hefting it slowly over the six wood back steps,
	Resting and breathing,
	Hands on hips.
	Each year she would think of helping.
	But she didn’t 
	And this time she could tell,
	She was really struggling.
	No one was there to help her.
	Years ago she had told her-
	“Scarlet Rose Mallow.
	Only plant it. Cut it back late fall
	And leave it in the ground.”
	But her friend hadn’t listened.
	She hadn’t listened to other things.
	But they were neighbors
	And she was from the west.
	They don’t listen,
	Everybody knew.
	Her neighbor had even been surprised
	When she had buried her husband
	In the back
	With a simple stone
	Next to a row of them.
	She could see them bloom,
	Five petals for each of their children,
        And sit with him anytime, any weather.
	Her western neighbor
	Had to go all the way to the 
	Church cemetery
	And shiver or hide under a parka.
	So today,
	After the struggle was over,
	She made some tea
	And walked the distance
        Cups and saucers on a tray,
        Imperfectly matched and unbalanced.
	It was about time
	They put differences aside.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/15/2021 2:19:00 PM
Creative work you have penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it. Sara
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Date: 11/30/2019 9:22:00 AM
You are very observant, it is what makes your writing feel real.
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Date: 2/8/2018 7:24:00 PM
What fabulous storytelling talent you have, Douglas. A treat to read.
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Date: 1/3/2018 2:01:00 PM
This poem is a true gift, so special. It encompasses a lot of emotions. But what I find beautiful about this story, is the gift of kindness from one person to another, perhaps a friendship begins and there is hope. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem.
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