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July- 14-2025
Some Kind of a Kaleidoscopic Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Nette Onclaud

 

As the first beams of light, Barged into my dark room, Saw dew drops glistening, On spring flowers that bloom. Kaleidoscopic hues, Dispelling all my gloom.

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Date: 7/15/2025 9:40:00 AM
Masterful few lines dear Valsa. Quite enjoyable to read. :)
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Date: 7/15/2025 6:24:00 AM
Indeed, the dew-drops are prisms of light. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/15/2025 5:10:00 AM
Ahh!! Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Quite creative. Sara K
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Date: 7/14/2025 10:52:00 PM
great music and images, a masterpiece, enjoyed
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Date: 7/14/2025 6:06:00 PM
I like the picture you paint with this poem, Valsa. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Hugs, Bill
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Date: 7/14/2025 10:10:00 AM
Beautiful poem with a picture.
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Date: 7/14/2025 5:45:00 AM
Nature can sure inspire us and as you suggest, even lift our mood. All thanks to the Creator of such magnificence and beauty. Nice verse Valsa
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