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Kaleidoscopic - Collab With Jo

Enjoying the kaleidoscopic view, As the sky changes to a brilliant hue, Songbirds fly across the clouds to their home, As the azure becomes a salmon dome, Tangerine sun recedes slow from the scene, Entering demurely is the night queen, What a sight to behold is this sunset! Nothing's more kaleidoscopic as yet! At times, it sprays magenta-colored skies exploding artistry that causes sighs and launches blasts of pinks entwined with gold- as sunsets fashion fireworks to behold. There's something great about a day that's done; Each sunset paves a path to morning's sun; Kaleidoscopic-like- it paints a slate; inspires to welcome in the new day's fate. April 30, 2023 Contest: Collab With Jo Sponsor: Joanna Daniels 10 syllables per line RZ HMS

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Date: 5/3/2023 6:36:00 AM
A beautiful kaleidoscopic nature write Sandra. Perfect collab. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2023 6:12:00 AM
Thank you, Linda, for your supportive comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 5/2/2023 1:23:00 AM
Exceptional use of imagery, Sandra, I loved this one, congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 5/4/2023 6:11:00 AM
Thank you, Joanna. It was great working on my addition to your lovely poem, and I appreciate my placement in your contest. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 4/30/2023 12:59:00 PM
what amazing imagery Sandra, its always a joy to read your exquisite lines:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/30/2023 1:17:00 PM
Thanks so much for the lovely comment Sandra, I know I have been missing from soup for many months, hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 4/30/2023 1:07:00 PM
Wow, Jan! So nice to see you are back! Been missing you here for sure!! Thanks for the nice comment! I collaborated with Joanna, supplying the last two verses! Again, welcome back! Hugs, Sandra

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