Home » Poems » Eve Roper » Just Within Reach

Just Within Reach

Just Within Reach What was I able to do compared to you? I had no clue I couldn't chew more, at my grasp My soul clasp to seek for you The mind refuses to focus Filled with impatience aimless ungratifying life to strife with purpose A gnawing realization Soak rain clouds and beaten My bubble has burst Slipped out of my fingers cursed without question The years have passed Still yearning in the back of my mind steadfast The wealth of my vision and shout in my ears will not hear to them unsurpassed © 4/15/2015

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/18/2015 8:19:00 AM

I like your take on the theme Eve.

Eve Roper
Date: 4/18/2015 8:22:00 AM

Thank you, Richard, I'm going to have to come visit today. Blessings eve

Delli Thami

Date: 4/17/2015 4:46:00 PM

very nice and well written piece. your writings are very empathetic I enjoy reading them. Good luck in the contest! - Lisa

Eve Roper
Date: 4/17/2015 8:32:00 PM

Thank you, Lisa for enjoying my poem and the good luck .Blessings Eve

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/16/2015 7:24:00 AM

A deeply introspective rubaiyat, dear Eve. It shows us the angsts and what-could-have-beens gnawing at the back of many people's minds. A 7. Hugs! :) Kim

Eve Roper
Date: 4/16/2015 8:52:00 AM

Hello Kim, Life sometimes gives you a curveball and you have to except that life has changed. With the tumor that was removed from my brain stop me from doing a lot ...... of things. Blessings dear friend Eve

Constance La France

Date: 4/16/2015 6:45:00 AM

Eve, your Rubaiyat poem is exceptional and impressive, 7, best of luck in the contest. I like this form and must give it a try and thanks for visiting my poem, The Ghetto (true story)

Eve Roper
Date: 4/16/2015 8:40:00 AM

Thank you, so much for your inspiring compliment. The poem is about myself. I knew it was a real story, your life has had more than one can endure. Blessings dear friend Eve