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Just Walking That Lonely Road

He walks the loneliest road Where he's from is buried in snow Where he's going, it's long ago Just walking that lonely road Life didn't start out that way Married his best girl on a sunny day Never knew how love could betray Walking the loneliest road Slammed the screen door, up and left town On a plastered face, his mustachioed frown He'd been high up -- he'd come all the way down Just walking that lonely road The years went by, lines creased his face His back bent from hard labor's disgrace No longer could he keep up the pace Walking the loneliest road One day they found him, not far from the road His body stiff from alcohol's load A stubborn man's death, not hard to decode Just walking that lonely road

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Date: 11/21/2021 4:46:00 PM
"No longer could he keep up the pace Walking the loneliest road" this is poignant.
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Date: 11/17/2021 11:21:00 AM
Sad, Life's journey for some is like this. While other's they can win the lottery 3 times. I guess this is the hand your dealt with in life. Well thought out poem ~ Debbie
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Date: 11/17/2021 11:00:00 AM
I really like the phrase, "Mustachioned frown" and the recurring last line of each verse. A sad and deadly path to take, and sader still that so many choose it. Then again, they're many lessons alone that road. A poet friend, Bill
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Date: 11/17/2021 5:39:00 AM
I see a song in this one GW! Well done! I especially like " Where he's going, it's long ago" lots of thought to ponder there!
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Date: 11/17/2021 6:12:00 PM
Mike, I had a melody in mind when I wrote it, a C&W type, but it drifted down that lonely road a ways, and now I can't get it back for the life of me. Thanks for the astute observation, and Season's Best, Gershon
Date: 11/16/2021 8:13:00 PM
Like walking in the dark blindfolded, it's impossible for anyone to envision fate's harsh judgement. Sadness in truth G.W. Peace...ab
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Date: 11/16/2021 8:01:00 PM
No happy ending like came back on the rebound and new love found? Alas, very few can accept, shrug and move on. Great narrative here, Gershon
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